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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

It’s not uncommon that having a property with the ownership yields many benefits in certain countries, but not everyone in the society have such financial capability to afford one. Many families in the under-developing countries are still living their lives either in a rented apartment or villas. Though it’s a widespread trend in some societies to live in a joined family system, but having a property on one’s ownership gives a luxury to accomplish such a dream. It doesn’t sound like a memory of the past, but a present one, when I recall the memories of the year 2020. Every industry was facing a devastating time of the year when the whole world was under the lockdown. In those times, one of my elder brothers in Cambridge, Canada, who was living in a basement of a shared villa decided to buy a home. Although he had been searching for one since a long time, but the pandemic allowed him to buy a home on a mortgage at a very fair price. This enabled him to get his family and children altogether under one roof. Now instead of being a tenant, living in a basement with a shared villa, buying a new home allowed him and his family to establish their life in a splendid way and plan their future ahead. It has been noted since ages that once the property trends fall due to many different reasons, the intelligent individuals are always keen to hunt for an opportunity to invest. Nowadays, owning a property have many upsides such as a source of passive income if a portion of the property is rented down the line, a sense of ownership, and security that regardless whatever happens, the owner is secured with their own land. One of the many downsides of renting a home in many countries are due to the regulations that restricts a tenant to make any modifications in the property. On the flip side, the tenant always has a liability to pay the bills regardless of their financial situation throughout the year. In the light of these issues, it can be concluded that although owning a property has many advantages, it’s recommended for a joined family system and having a sense of an ownership. But on the other hand, it is also not possible for many individuals to invest in buying a property. Therefore, it completely depends on the financial situation of the people.
It’s not uncommon that having a
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property
with the
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ownership
yields
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many
benefits in certain countries,
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but
not everyone in the society have such financial capability to afford one.
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families
in the under-
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developing countries
are
still
living their
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lives
either in a rented apartment or villas. Though it’s a widespread trend in
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some
societies to
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live
in a
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joined
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family
system,
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but
having a
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property
on one’s
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ownership
gives a luxury to accomplish such a dream.

It doesn’t sound like a memory of the past,
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but
a present one, when I recall the memories of the year 2020. Every industry was facing a devastating time of the year when the whole world was under the lockdown. In those times, one of my elder brothers in Cambridge, Canada, who was living in a basement of a shared villa decided to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
a home. Although he had been searching for one since a long time,
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but
the pandemic
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allowed
him to
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buy
a home on a mortgage at a
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very
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fair
price. This enabled him to
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get
his
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family
and children altogether under one roof.
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Now
instead
of being a tenant, living in a basement with a shared villa, buying a new home
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allowed
him and his
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family
to establish their life in a splendid way and plan their future ahead.

It has
been noted
since ages that once the
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property
trends fall due to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
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different
reasons, the intelligent individuals are always keen to hunt for an opportunity to invest. Nowadays, owning a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
property
have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
upsides such as a source of passive income if a portion of the
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property
is rented
down the line, a sense of
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ownership
, and security that regardless whatever happens, the owner
is secured
with their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
land. One of the
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many
downsides of renting a home in
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many
countries are due to the regulations that restricts a tenant to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
any modifications in the
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property
. On the flip side, the tenant always has a liability to pay the bills regardless of their financial situation throughout the year.

In the light of these issues, it can
be concluded
that although owning a
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property
has
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
advantages, it’s recommended for a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
joined
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family
system and having a sense of an
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ownership
.
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But
on the other hand
, it is
also
not possible for
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many
individuals to invest in buying a
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property
.
Therefore
, it completely depends on the financial situation of the
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people
.
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IELTS essay In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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