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in some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why this might be the case? do you think it's a positive or negative situation?

in some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why this might be the case? do you think it's a positive or negative situation? E33RM
It is claimed that there are some nations where being landlord is preferable rather than being renter among people. This essay would argue that the main reason for this is that buying and owing a home is considered as a kind of investment throughout people’s attitudes, and I assert that this is a negative condition because it can be demanding for landlord to relocate. The main reason to prefer having house rather than renting is the investment. That is to say buying a house is considered as a kind of investment in long term period among communities’ approach, because the price of land, especially in metropolis, is increasing day by day. Therefore, if people buy a house right now, it is highly likely that the price of their house will doubled or even tripled until two next years. For example, in Iran right now, the price of one meter of house has been doubled from 2019 to 2020. However, this essay would argue that this is quite negative situation because relocating home owner is relatively more demanding than tenants. It means that if people rent a house, it is highly likely to relocate easily to an area near their workplace, but selling a house is a long term process for home owners, in particularly in capital’s cities all around the world. For instance, the number of working people who tend to rent house near their workplaces is rising in New York due to the selling process hardship. In conclusion, investing money is the chief reason for a preference to buy house among societies and I believe that this matter is a negative situation because it is hard for home owners to move easily from their owned houses.
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is claimed
that there are
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some
nations where being landlord is preferable
rather
than being renter among
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people
. This essay would argue that the main reason for this is that buying and owing a home
is considered
as a kind of investment throughout
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people’s
attitudes, and I assert that this is a
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negative
condition
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because
it can be demanding for landlord to relocate.

The main reason to prefer having
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house
rather
than renting is the investment.
That is
to say buying a
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house
is considered
as a kind of investment in long term period among communities’ approach,
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because
the price of land,
especially
in metropolis, is increasing day by day.
Therefore
, if
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people
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buy
a
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house
right
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now
, it is
highly
likely that the price of their
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house
will
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "double"
doubled
or even tripled until two
next
years.
For example
, in Iran right
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now
, the price of one meter of
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house
has
been doubled
from 2019 to 2020.

However
, this essay would argue that this is quite
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negative
situation
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because
relocating
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home owner
is
relatively
more demanding than tenants. It means that if
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people
rent a
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house
, it is
highly
likely to relocate
easily
to an area near their workplace,
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but
selling a
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house
is a long term process for
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home owners
, in
particularly
in capital’s cities all around the world.
For instance
, the number of working
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people
who tend to rent
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house
near their workplaces is rising in New York due to the selling process hardship.

In conclusion
, investing money is the chief reason for a preference to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
among societies and I believe that this matter is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
situation
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because
it is
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hard
for
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home owners
to
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move
easily
from their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
owned
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houses
.
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IELTS essay in some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why this might be the case? do you think it's a positive or negative situation?

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  American English
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