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In some countries,owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might be the case? Do you think this is positive or negative situation

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might be the case? Do you think this is positive or negative situation 9Awj
In some countries, where owning personal house is more advantageous instead of renting one for the people. I personally believe that owning house is very important. First of all, If you brought your own home, you can change or design it by yourself. You can able to organize things as per your convenience. You can redecorate, you can paint as you like. Apply You don’t have to pay any maintenance charges as well as rent for all your life. For instance, if you want to give white color all over the place and wanted some walls covered with wallpaper then you can apply it, no one will oppose you because its your home and you have decorated it with your own ideas. Secondly, if you are renting home then there will be some restriction all over the home. You have to manage first broker then owner and rental agreement these are very time consuming processes. Also in some countries it is a rule that you have to leave same flat as it was before rented. So you have to use others property very carefully otherwise you have to pay extra charges while leaving. On the top of that you have to pay monthly rent as well as maintenance charge to the society. Resources in the home were not in good condition then you have to contact your owner and then it will be get repair. This is also time consuming process. To sum up, if you are financially stable person then without a dought you should buy own house and that will be your peace place.
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some
countries, where owning personal
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house
is more advantageous
instead
of renting one for the
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people
. I
personally
believe that owning
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house
is
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very
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important
.

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First of all
, If you brought your
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own
home, you can
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change
or design it by yourself. You
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can able to
organize things as per your convenience. You can redecorate, you can paint as you like. Apply You don’t
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have to
pay any maintenance charges
as well
as rent for all your life.
For instance
, if you want to give white color all over the place and wanted
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some
walls covered with wallpaper then you can apply it, no one will oppose you
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because
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its
your home and you have decorated it with your
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own
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ideas
.

Secondly
, if you are renting home then there will be
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some
restriction all over the home. You
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have to
manage
first
broker then owner and rental agreement these are
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very
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time consuming
processes.
Also
in
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some
countries it is a
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rule
that you
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have to
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leave
same flat as it was
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before
rented.
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So
you
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have to
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use
others property
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very
carefully
otherwise
you
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have to
pay extra charges while leaving. On the top of that you
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have to
pay monthly rent
as well
as maintenance charge to the society. Resources in the home were not in
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good
condition then you
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have to
contact your owner and then it will be
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get
repair. This is
also
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time consuming
process.

To sum up, if you are
financially
stable person then without a
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dought
you should
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buy
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
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house
and that will be your peace place.

IELTS essay In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might be the case? Do you think this is positive or negative situation

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4 paragraphs
266 words
6.0
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