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In some countries,owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might be the case? Do you think this is positive or negative situation

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might be the case? Do you think this is positive or negative situation 9Awj

In some countries, where owning personal house is more advantageous instead of renting one for the people. I personally believe that owning house is very important. First of all, If you brought your own home, you can change or design it by yourself. You can able to organize things as per your convenience. You can redecorate, you can paint as you like. Apply You don’t have to pay any maintenance charges as well as rent for all your life. For instance, if you want to give white color all over the place and wanted some walls covered with wallpaper then you can apply it, no one will oppose you because its your home and you have decorated it with your own ideas. Secondly, if you are renting home then there will be some restriction all over the home. You have to manage first broker then owner and rental agreement these are very time consuming processes. Also in some countries it is a rule that you have to leave same flat as it was before rented. So you have to use others property very carefully otherwise you have to pay extra charges while leaving. On the top of that you have to pay monthly rent as well as maintenance charge to the society. Resources in the home were not in good condition then you have to contact your owner and then it will be get repair. This is also time consuming process. To sum up, if you are financially stable person then without a dought you should buy own house and that will be your peace place.

In This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 countries, where owning personal This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 is more advantageous instead
 of renting one for the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. I personally
 believe that owning This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, If you brought your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 home, you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 or design it by yourself. You Please check whether one of these words is redundant.can
can able to
 organize things as per your convenience. You can redecorate, you can paint as you like. Apply You don’t This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 pay any maintenance charges as well
 as rent for all your life. For instance
, if you want to give white color all over the place and wanted This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 walls covered with wallpaper then you can apply it, no one will oppose you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
Did you mean "it's" (="it is") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?it'sit is
its
 your home and you have decorated it with your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtsconceptsnotions
ideas
.

Secondly
, if you are renting home then there will be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 restriction all over the home. You This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 manage first
 broker then owner and rental agreement these are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.time-consuming
time consuming
 processes. Also
 in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 countries it is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirement
rule
 that you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 same flat as it was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 rented. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 others property This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
carefully
otherwise
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 pay extra charges while leaving. On the top of that you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 pay monthly rent as well
 as maintenance charge to the society. Resources in the home were not in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 condition then you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 contact your owner and then it will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 repair. This is also
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.time-consuming
time consuming
 process.

To sum up, if you are financially
 stable person then without a Possible spelling mistake found.boughtfoughtsoughtdroughtoughtdough
dought
 you should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 and that will be your peace place. 