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in some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.

in some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. 62LW
Having one’s own house is very crucial for some people in certain areas of the world. There are a lot of reasons for this; first being, it gives people sense of belonging to a place. Rented properties are temporary holdings that people opt for when they cannot afford their own place or living at place for shorter period of time. Also, renting accommodation comes with security risks whereas owning a place ensures long term safety and relief that no one can displace the resident. This idea of owning a property has lots of merits. It drives people to work harder and save up so that they invest in a house later. Moreover, it is associated with sense of accomplishment which can boost the confidence of people. However, it puts lots of pressure on a person especially the inflation and increasing rates of houses now-a-days. For some, it becomes main goal of their life as owning a house means having a successful life. When they are not able to achieve that by a certain age limit, they blame themselves and end up dissatisfied. Entertaining the idea of owning a dream house is extremely fulfilling but it should be ultimate goal. Considering the cost of home these days and interest rates of company people should be more open to renting.
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in certain areas of the world. There are
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sense of belonging to a
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. Rented properties are temporary holdings that
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people
opt for when they cannot afford their
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own
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place
or living at
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for shorter period of time.
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, renting accommodation
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comes
with security
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whereas
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owning
a
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ensures long term safety and relief that no one can displace the resident.

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a property has lots of merits. It drives
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to work harder and save up
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that they invest in a
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later.
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-a-days. For
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, it becomes main goal of their life as
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means having a successful life. When they are not able to achieve that by a certain age limit, they blame themselves and
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end
up dissatisfied.

Entertaining the
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company
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should be more open to renting.
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IELTS essay in some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
218 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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