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In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is important for people why my this will be better do you think this is a positive or negative development

In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is important for people why my this will be better do you think this is a positive or negative development aoDd

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nowadays
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thought
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positive
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latest
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purchase
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no
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on on
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so
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house
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positive
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negative
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most of benefit
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purchase
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pleased
 their parents respect benefits of private housing it has also
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negative
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negative
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