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In some countries. Owning a home is more important rather than ranting it why might this be

In some countries. Owning a home is more important rather than ranting it why might this be 7WY5k
In this modran era. Everyone want to buy their own space rather than stay on others home even in some countries people are more ceorius about this matter. however. in my piece of writing I will discuss some view points in upcoming paragraph Firstly. it is believed if some stay on someone place they face lot of problems for example they don't make their own room as they think about it they just leave under rules which are make their home owner. moreover second one is they don't have rights to disgen they room as they want to dacorate it. that's why people like to buy their own house On the flip side their are no doubt everyone do not have enough money to buy their own house that is why they like to stay on others. subsequently. In the same way people do not have much time to take care of their home since of their busy schedules. so it is fine to for them to leave on others house without carry lot of burden on their shoulders In conclusion in my prospective buy a house have lot of advantages but as well as their as some drawbacks which no one can hide in fact people know already know about their goods or bads so
In this
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modran
era. Everyone
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want
to
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buy
their
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own
space
rather
than stay on others home even in
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some
countries
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people
are more
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ceorius
about this matter.
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however
.
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in
my piece of writing I will discuss
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some
view points in upcoming paragraph
Firstly
.
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it
is believed
if
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some
stay on someone
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place
they face
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lot of
problems
for example
they don't
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make
their
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own
room as they
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think
about
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it
they
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just
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leave
under
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rules
which are
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make
their
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home owner
.
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moreover
second one is they don't have rights to
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disgen
they room as they want to
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dacorate
it. that's why
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people
like to
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buy
their
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own
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house
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their
are no doubt everyone
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do
not have
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enough
money to
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buy
their
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own
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house
that is
why they like to stay on others.
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subsequently
.
In the same way
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people
do not have much time to take care of their home since of their busy schedules.
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so
it is fine to for them to
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leave
on others
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house
without carry
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lot of
burden on their shoulders
In conclusion
in my prospective
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buy
a
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house
have lot of advantages
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but
as well
as their as
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some
drawbacks which no one can
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hide
in fact
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people
know already know about their
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goods
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or bads
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so
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IELTS essay In some countries. Owning a home is more important rather than ranting it why might this be

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