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Job Responsibilities at different companies

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I am a database developer with 7 years experience. I have worked with in the team as an junior Programmer in the samad rubber works, but now i work as a SAP consultant in Group Multiple Co. I have veriaty of expericne in the the ERP field but know i have been working as crystal reprot developer for four years in couple of compnies. I am an expert to motivate the team and also have strong reporting skill to heighr managment. I have been work with the multiple ERP Implementation team from begining to end. I had had an award in 2019 for the best performer of the year. I am very hard worker and quick lerner.
I am a database developer with 7 years experience. I have worked with in the team as
an
junior Programmer in
the


samad
rubber works,
but
now
i
work as a SAP consultant in Group Multiple Co. I have
veriaty
of
expericne
in the

the
ERP field
but
know
i
have been working as crystal
reprot
developer for four years in
couple of
compnies
.

I am an expert to motivate the team and
also
have strong reporting
skill
to
heighr
managment
.

I have been work with the multiple ERP Implementation team from
begining
to
end
.
I
had had an award in 2019 for the
best


performer
of the year. I am
very
hard
worker and quick
lerner
.
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IELTS essay Job Responsibilities at different companies

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