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As a colonial mentality, having two parents in child's life is important, and raising them is a primitive responsibility of parents. A very first prominent advantage of cooperation of parents to bear in mind is children for building their character's needs to realize both feminine and masculine features and when they are in touch with both their parents they can learn each side from them. What is more, when both of parents have collaborated with each other the difficulty of this way become easier, they can share their duties and have more time for themselves and improve their knowledge and awareness in the field of upbringing. likewise, they feel better in this way and they can play a more effective role and transfer them the belief their presence gives them joy and delight. Furthermore, they both play very distinct and important roles in the psychological and emotional development of a child. By this I mean, both parents have a unique and crucial role in nurturing and guiding children's care and development. They have the ability to help their child succeed by giving direction and opportunities.
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to bear in mind is children for building their character's needs to realize both feminine and masculine features and when they are in touch with both their
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they can learn each side from them.
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, when both of
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have collaborated with each other the difficulty of this way become easier, they can share their duties and have more time for themselves and
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their knowledge and awareness in the field of upbringing.
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roles in the psychological and emotional development of a child. By this I mean, both
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have a unique and crucial role in nurturing and guiding children's care and development. They have the ability to
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their child succeed by giving direction and opportunities.
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IELTS essay effective of both roles parents

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