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In some countries 18 is the legal age to vote, to drive and to marry, while it’s higher in some others. Do you think it’s the right age? Support your statement with relevant examples

In some countries 18 is the legal age to vote, to drive and to marry, while it’s higher in some others. Do you think it’s the right age? Support your statement with relevant examples DNgPp
A number of regions has set the legal age of 18 to ballot, to ride, and to marry; however, in other nations the age is more. In my opinion, this is the proper age due to the fact that at this age the brain is fully developed and individuals are mature. I will explain my viewpoint in the upcoming paragraphs of this essay. In conclusion, owing to the development of mind is complete in 18's, and individuals acquire matureness at this age, so the statement 18 is the legal age for marriage, ballot and to ride is logically sound.
A number of regions has set the legal
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age
of 18 to ballot, to ride, and to marry;
however
, in other nations the
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age
is more. In my opinion, this is the proper
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age
due to the fact that at this
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the brain is
fully
developed and individuals are mature. I will
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explain
my viewpoint in the upcoming paragraphs of this essay.

In conclusion
, owing to the development of mind is complete in 18's, and individuals acquire
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matureness
at this
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,
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the statement 18 is the legal
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for marriage, ballot and to ride is
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sound.

IELTS essay In some countries 18 is the legal age to vote, to drive and to marry, while it’s higher in some others. Do you think it’s the right age? Support your statement with relevant examples

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  American English
2 paragraphs
99 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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