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In some areas of US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

In some areas of US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this? P0Xw
As a result of night curfew in US, teenagers can go outside with guardians only. Most of the people have welcomed this decision from government whereas, there are some voices against as well. In my opinion, its a good step to control ongoing incidents with teenagers but should be some exceptions as well. First of all, we have seen rise in kidnapping cases in recent days, and most of these cases have occurred at night. Children under the age of 15 are at the target of the kidnappers. Recently, we have heard in news that, a 14 years old boy was kidnapped from a night party and demanded a huge amount of ransom. Even after providing money parents didn't get their child back. So, parents' should try to accompany their children in these kind of events, which will help in reduction of such incidents. Secondly, young children have an urge to know new things, which sometimes lead them to bad company. They can start taking drugs, playing in casinos or even can indulge in incidents like rape or killing. Some times ago, we have read in a newspaper regarding firing in a store, in which some teenagers were involved. One of them was 12 years young and now that incident will spoil his whole life. Hence, supervision of young children is necessary and specially at night, if they want to go outside, as plethora of incidents happened at that time only. On contrary, some people think that teenagers should have their freedom and it should not be restricted by any means. In their opinion, instead of accompanying, parents should provide good educational them, so that they know difference between good and bad. Government should also provide them more facilities in games and organizesports competitions regularly, so that instead of indulging in wrong incident teenagers can use their energy in competitive sports events, which will lead to a healthy and safe society. In conclusion, its necessary to provide good education and sports facilities to children for better future, but its a good step by US government to implement night curfew for teenagers, which will definitely help in reduction of incidents happened with these young children.
As a result
of
night
curfew in US,
teenagers
can go outside with guardians
only
. Most of the
people
have welcomed this decision from
government
whereas, there are
some
voices against
as well
. In my opinion,
its
a
good
step to control ongoing
incidents
with
teenagers
but
should be
some
exceptions
as well
.
First of all
, we have
seen
rise in kidnapping cases in recent days, and most of these cases have occurred at
night
.
Children
under the age of 15 are at the target of the kidnappers. Recently, we have heard in news that, a 14 years
old
boy
was kidnapped
from a
night
party and demanded a huge amount of ransom.
Even after
providing money parents didn't
get
their child back.
So
, parents' should try to accompany their
children
in
these kind
of
events
, which will
help
in reduction of such
incidents
.
Secondly
,
young
children
have an urge to know new things, which
sometimes
lead them to
bad
company
. They can
start
taking drugs, playing in casinos or even can indulge in
incidents
like rape or killing.
Some
times ago, we have read in a newspaper regarding firing in a store, in which
some
teenagers
were involved
. One of them was 12 years
young
and
now
that
incident
will spoil his whole life.
Hence
, supervision of
young
children
is necessary and
specially
at
night
, if they want to go outside, as plethora of
incidents
happened at that time
only
. On contrary,
some
people
think
that
teenagers
should have their freedom and it should not
be restricted
by any means. In their opinion,
instead
of accompanying, parents should provide
good
educational them,
so
that they know difference between
good
and
bad
.
Government
should
also
provide them more facilities in games and
organizesports
competitions
regularly
,
so
that
instead
of indulging in
wrong
incident
teenagers
can
use
their energy in competitive sports
events
, which will lead to a healthy and safe society.
In conclusion
, its necessary to provide
good
education and sports facilities to
children
for better future,
but
its
a
good
step by US
government
to implement
night
curfew for
teenagers
, which will definitely
help
in reduction of
incidents
happened with these
young
children
.
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IELTS essay In some areas of US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

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