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In recent years technology has significantly changed the interaction between people. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is argued that technology has altered the interaction between people importantly in the last years. To my way of thinking, the varying of the interaction is not a good way for people. This essay will argue that the biggest advantage of technology is to have an easer world and to not feel the feelings is the primary disadvantege in the interaction with people. On the one hand, many people belive that technology has many benefits. The most impotant is that having easer world for people who have the interaction with each other. Therefore, especially in Corona period eventhougt nobody can visit their acquaintances, almost everybody who has some programs such as zoom, WhatsApp which give opportunity to people in their personal computers or phones can keep in touch each other. To give an example, even if we do not visit our relatives due to the situation that is appeared in corona process, we can talk to them via WhatsApp. However, there are also some disadvanteges. The most important is "to not feel the feelings" about people you miss. Thus, you will never stop your graving. To examplify, personally i am a person who fond of touching while i am contacting with my friends. Yet, only calling them or seeing their faces by phone is not ample and never stop my longing. İn conclusion, despite the fact that the way of interaction has benefits in the socaity that we contact in which we live in the last some years with technology, it has also negative aspect necessarily.
It
is argued
that
technology
has altered the
interaction
between
people
importantly
in the last years. To my way of thinking, the varying of the
interaction
is not a
good
way for
people
. This essay will argue that the biggest advantage of
technology
is to have an
easer
world and to not feel the feelings is the primary
disadvantege
in the
interaction
with
people
.

On the one hand,
many
people
belive
that
technology
has
many
benefits. The most
impotant
is that having
easer
world for
people
who have the
interaction
with each other.
Therefore
,
especially
in Corona period
eventhougt
nobody can visit their acquaintances, almost everybody who has
some
programs such as zoom, WhatsApp which give opportunity to
people
in their personal computers or phones can
keep
in touch each other. To give an example, even if we do not visit our relatives due to the situation that
is appeared
in corona process, we can talk to them via WhatsApp.

However
, there are
also
some
disadvanteges
. The most
important
is
"
to not feel the feelings
"
about
people
you miss.
Thus
, you will never
stop
your graving. To
examplify
,
personally
i
am a person
who fond
of touching while
i
am contacting with my friends.
Yet
,
only
calling them or seeing their faces by phone is not ample and never
stop
my longing.

İn
conclusion, despite the fact that the way of
interaction
has benefits in the
socaity
that we contact in which we l
ive
in the last s
ome
years with
technology
, it has a
lso
n
egative
aspect
necessarily
.
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IELTS essay In recent years technology has significantly changed the interaction between people. Is this a positive or negative development?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
257 words
6.0
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