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In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? v.4

In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? v. 4
Due to the recent technological development, more people start preferring e-book on paper books. I believe the advantages of reading e-books outweigh the disadvantages. This essay will discuss both sides and provide a conclusion. To start with, there are many advantages of reading e-books. Firstly, e-books are easily accessible either on the local devices or online on the internet. Due to this fact, people they can read e-book anytime and anywhere with a single click. For example, during the commute period most people read e-books either they have on their devices or browsing it from the internet. Secondly, with the huge pressure on the environment, e-books are considered Eco friendly. Accordingly, e-books reduce the demand on paper usage, therefore; our natural resources will be saved. In addition, as e-books are available electronically in different formats, they are stored and carried easily. The user can store them using multiple media such as CD or USB pen, and this will eliminate the need to hold the traditional book everywhere we go. On the other hand, as e-books are having advantages, they are having disadvantages. To commence with, with the consistent use of the e-books, the user health will be impacted in many ways. Reading from e-book, will impact the vision and lead to other health problems. For instance, the continues reading from the mobile or tablet devices might lead to a neck pain. Moreover, e-books do not have the same reading experience of a traditional book. By reading a traditional book, the user will have enjoyable experience compared with e-book. To sum up, the technologies are pushing the readers toward e-books where they have many advantages such as accessibility, but the also have disadvantages like health problem. However, e-books are considered as the best option for may readers despite the disadvantages they have.
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e-books outweigh the disadvantages. This essay will discuss both sides and provide a conclusion.

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e-books.
Firstly
, e-books are
easily
accessible either on the local devices or online on the internet. Due to this fact,
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people
they can read e-book anytime and anywhere with a single click.
For example
, during the commute period most
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people
read e-books either they have on their devices or browsing it from the internet.
Secondly
, with the huge pressure on the environment, e-books
are considered
Eco friendly.
Accordingly
, e-books
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reduce
the demand on paper usage,
therefore
; our natural resources will
be saved
.

In addition
, as e-books are available
electronically
in
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different
formats, they
are stored
and carried
easily
. The user can store them using multiple media such as CD or USB pen, and this will eliminate the need to hold the traditional
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book
everywhere we go.

On the other hand
, as e-books are having
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advantages
, they are having disadvantages. To commence with, with the consistent
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of the e-books, the user health will
be impacted
in
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ways.
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Reading
from e-book, will impact the vision and lead to other health problems.
For instance
, the continues
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reading
from the mobile or tablet devices might lead to a neck pain.
Moreover
, e-books do not have the same
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reading
experience of a traditional
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book
. By
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reading
a traditional
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book
, the user will have enjoyable experience compared with e-book.

To sum up, the technologies are pushing the readers toward e-books where they have
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many
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advantages
such as accessibility,
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also
have disadvantages like health problem.
However
, e-books
are considered
as the best option for may readers despite the disadvantages they have.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? v. 4

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
301 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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Lexical Resource: 7.5
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Task Achievement: 7.5
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