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In recent years,houshold wastes are significantly increasing.In addition, nobody try to solve problem and say the government to fix it.Many people think that authority should make some lows the recycling process.I will discuss about legal requirement a way to increase recycling and the other ways.

In recent years, houshold wastes are significantly increasing. In addition, nobody try to solve problem and say the government to fix it. Many people think that authority should make some lows the recycling process. I will discuss about legal requirement a way to increase recycling and the other ways. VyDL3
Firstly, should it be compulsory for people to recycle waste? Environment problems are the main problem of our the world and we do not help it. Government should make some decisions about recycling and should be put some taxes on income about this. For example, If you do not attention the dustbin or if you exit too much you should be punish. Usually, people only to do right thing for rules, so it might be possible to change a person am eco-friendly. On the other hand, many ways could be enhance responsibility to recycle. Laws are not the only outcome, there is also way reward someone. For instance, In Pekin, people change plastic bottle for underground ticket. This could be a reason that people recycle more try to be more aware about ecology. In conclusion, this process could give desire to people to recycle their domestic waste. I think it people recycle less they should reduce their waste.
Firstly
, should it be compulsory for
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people
to
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recycle
waste? Environment problems are the main problem of our the
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
world and
we do not
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help
it.
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Government
should
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make
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some
decisions about recycling and should
be put
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some
taxes on income about this.
For example
, If you do not attention the dustbin or if you exit too much you should be
Consider using the past participle "punished"?
punish
.
Usually
,
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people
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only
to do right thing for
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rules
,
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so
it might be possible to
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change
a person am eco-friendly.
On the other hand
,
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many
ways could be
Consider using the past participle "enhanced"?
enhance
responsibility to
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recycle
. Laws are not the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
outcome, there is
also
way reward someone.
For instance
, In
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Pekin
,
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people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
plastic bottle for underground ticket. This could be a reason that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycle
more try to be more aware about ecology.
In conclusion
, this process could give desire to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycle
their domestic waste. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
it
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people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycle
less they should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
their waste.
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IELTS essay In recent years, houshold wastes are significantly increasing. In addition, nobody try to solve problem and say the government to fix it. Many people think that authority should make some lows the recycling process. I will discuss about legal requirement a way to increase recycling and the other ways.

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