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home isolation so whenever finishing a successful door-to-door

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"In this period of time, everyone have to comply home isolation so whenever finishing a successful door-to-door delivery order, i myself feels delighted. " - Mr. Dũng, a Shopee Express shipper working at the locality of District 5 opened up while being snowed under a great deal of resurgent orders in the early days of september. Not until after August 31st, as working at the Green Zone, did he spend approximately an hour ranging from 6 to 7 A. M to commence testing COVID-19 prior to receiving goods from the warehouse and taking other precautionary safety measures. These routines are prerequisites for Mr. Dũng to start a new working day in particular and are some lifestyle adjustments of a multitude of delivers who are working in every corner of Ho Chi Minh City in general - "the nerve-centre" that are taking up many crucial responsibilities in the circulation of commodities when a million of people must stays indoors to minimize the number of infected cases. In fact, Social-distancing brings about ample arduousness for the delivery process. Nevertheless, the factors of safety and the compliance with preventing diceases are still always prioritized at the forefront by the shipping workforce in order to guarantee that the operating activities and circulation of commodities can make good process. With almost shippers, the delivery task in the quarantine period is far more strenuous than before. However, things that cause most concerns for the multitudes at the moment is how to contrive to live on their income through out the epidemic term, especially for those who are shouldering the financial burden to earn a living for the whole family.
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"
In this period of time, everyone
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have
to comply home isolation
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so
whenever finishing a successful door-to-door delivery order, i myself feels delighted.
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"
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Mr.
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Dũng
, a
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Shopee
Express shipper
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working
at the locality of District 5 opened up while
being snowed
under a great deal of resurgent orders in the early days of
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september
. Not until after August 31st, as
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working
at the Green Zone, did he spend approximately an hour ranging from 6 to 7 A. M to commence testing COVID-19 prior to receiving
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
from the warehouse and taking other precautionary safety measures.

These routines are prerequisites for Mr.
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Dũng
to
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start
a new
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working
day
in particular
and are
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some
lifestyle adjustments of a multitude of delivers who are
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working
in every corner of Ho Chi Minh City
in general
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-
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"
the
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nerve-centre
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"
that are taking up
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many
crucial responsibilities in the circulation of commodities when a million of
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people
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must
The verb 'must' requires the base form of the verb: "stay"
stays
indoors to minimize the number of infected cases.

In fact, Social-distancing brings about ample arduousness for the delivery process.
Nevertheless
, the factors of safety and the compliance with preventing
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diceases
are
still
always prioritized at the forefront by the shipping workforce in order to guarantee that the operating activities and circulation of commodities can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
process.

With almost shippers, the delivery task in the quarantine period is far more strenuous than
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
.
However
, things that cause most concerns for the multitudes at the moment is how to contrive to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
on their income
Did you mean "throughout"?
through out
the epidemic term,
especially
for those who are shouldering the financial burden to earn a living for the whole family.
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IELTS essay home isolation so whenever finishing a successful door-to-door

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
273 words
5.5
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