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Statement of purpose for college admissions

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My father's proffesion of creating and building structures, lured me into the design feild. Following his footsteps I persued my Bachelor's of Architecture Degree from Mumbai University. The course introduced me to various aspects of design and softwares used to make them. I love to learn new things and I was always amazed by designs of all sorts and not just architecture. Since the pandemic struck, it gave me more time to learn and experiement with various new forms of design such as Illustrations and Logo Designs. After my degree, I got an opportunity to work part time with a startup, where I got to work as a grahic designer; while full time being a junior Architect and assisting my father. This new startup branding experience opened doors for me to the world of digital media.
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proffesion
of creating and building structures, lured me into the
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design
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feild
. Following his footsteps I
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persued
my Bachelor's of Architecture Degree from Mumbai University. The course introduced me to various aspects of
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design
and
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softwares
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used
to
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make
them.

I
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love
to learn new
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things and
I was always amazed by
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designs
of all sorts and not
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just
architecture. Since the pandemic struck, it gave me more time to learn and
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experiement
with various new forms of
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design
such as Illustrations and Logo
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Designs
. After my degree, I
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got
an opportunity to work
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part time
with a startup, where I
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got
to work as a
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grahic
designer; while full time being a junior Architect and assisting my father.

This new startup branding experience opened doors for me to the world of digital media.

IELTS essay Statement of purpose for college admissions

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
136 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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