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In recent years a large number of highly skilled professionals like doctors, engineers and IT professionals from poorer countries are migrating to developed countries for better-paying jobs. What are the possible problems of this and what solutions can you suggest to deal with this issue?

In recent years a large number of highly skilled professionals like doctors, engineers and IT professionals from poorer countries are migrating to developed countries for better-paying jobs. What are the possible problems of this and what solutions can you suggest to deal with this issue? 2brwJ
Over the past few centuries, numerous quantities of highly adept specialists like medics, engineers and information technology experts from impoverished nations are travelling to advanced homelands for superior paying works. This will discuss about problems faced by such professionals in poor nations and also suggest possible solution In recent times, Engineers are not being utilized to their full potential. Underutilization of highly adept engineers are making them feel insignificant. In a globalized world, where every aspect of day to day life is grounded upon significant level of engineering, Engineer being overlooked is not a good sign for overall progress of the nation. Engineers on one hand are very enthusiastic to use their skills for betterment of the society after their graduation but on other hand after being employed, various establishments do not use engineer’s expertise in the subject but force their personal ideas and kill their enthusiasm. So, many engineers tend to migrate to developed countries where they feel wanted and have liberty to express their views without being judged. For example, in a recent survey conducted by “University of Texas A&M”, it clearly stated that 85% of foreign engineers chose to study in the respective university because of lack of utilization in their respective countries. Only possible solution that can revive this current situation is to properly utilize the expertise keeping diplomacy at the bay. Engineers must be acknowledged by his knowledge, and complete freedom to express his/her views must be given. Proper guidance and also utilizing proficiency of an engineer not only develops the establishments but in turn increases the economy of the country. For instance, the great industrialist Ratan Tata studied in Harvard business school, returned to India after graduation and the rest is history. To conclude with a famous saying, “Country develops with developed engineers”. Engineers must be recognized and utilized to their full potential for better development of the country and as well as retrieving their economy.
Over the past few centuries, numerous quantities of
highly
adept specialists like medics,
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engineers
and information technology experts from impoverished nations are travelling to advanced homelands for superior paying works. This will
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discuss about problems
faced by such professionals in poor nations and
also
suggest possible solution

In recent times,
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Engineers
are not
being utilized
to their full potential. Underutilization of
highly
adept
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engineers
are making them feel insignificant. In a globalized world, where every aspect of day to day life
is grounded
upon significant level of engineering,
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Engineer
being overlooked
is not a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sign
for
overall
progress of the nation.
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Engineers
on one hand are
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very
enthusiastic to
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use
their
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skills
for betterment of the society after their graduation
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but
on other hand after
being employed
, various establishments do not
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use
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engineer’s
expertise in the subject
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but
force their personal
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ideas
and kill their enthusiasm.
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So
,
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many
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engineers
tend to migrate to developed
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countries
where they feel wanted and have liberty to express their views without
being judged
.
For example
, in a recent survey conducted by “University of Texas A&M”, it
clearly
stated that 85% of foreign
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engineers
chose to study in the respective university
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of lack of utilization in their respective countries.

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Only
possible solution that can revive this
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current
situation is to
properly
utilize the expertise keeping diplomacy at the bay.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Engineers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be acknowledged
by his knowledge, and complete freedom to express his/her views
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be
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given
. Proper guidance and
also
utilizing proficiency of an
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engineer
not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
develops the establishments
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
in turn increases the economy of the
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country
.
For instance
, the great industrialist
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Ratan
Tata studied in Harvard business school, returned to India after graduation and the rest is history.

To conclude
with a
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famous
saying,
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“Country
develops with developed
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engineers”
.
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Engineers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be recognized
and utilized to their full potential for better development of the
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country
and
as well
as retrieving their economy.
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IELTS essay In recent years a large number of highly skilled professionals like doctors, engineers and IT professionals from poorer countries are migrating to developed countries for better-paying jobs. What are the possible problems of this and what solutions can you suggest to deal with this issue?

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