In recent years, young people tend to have more time for their friends while they spend less time with their families. Teenagers usually choose to be with their peers because they find them more available and understanding when compared to their family. I believe parents shouldn’t force their children instead they should find activities to gain their child’s attention.
Overwhelming struggles of business world usually gets in the way of parents and their children. When both parents have to work for financial needs, children look outside to find the attention they need. Because on a daily basis, working parents aren’t available and even when they are at home, they are either tired of the work or there is always housework to do. For example, both of my parents were working and my mother would do house work when she gets back while my father would watch television complaining about his day, I had no choice but looking for friends to spend time and talk because they weren’t paying enough attention.
Moreover, most parents forget they were a child once and they usually overreact to their children’s actions or decisions. They are either over-protective about their child or think that they can’t do mistakes which overwhelms their child. Such behaviours lead the child to prefer to be with his/her friends and discuss their problem instead of their parents.
In conclusion, even if parents are working, they should spare a proper amount of time for their children to have a quality family time. Also, they should be aware of their reactions might frighten their children and damage their relationship.
In recent years, young
people
tend to have more
time
for their friends while they spend less
time
with their families.
Teenagers
usually
choose to be with their peers
because
they find them more available and understanding when compared to their family. I believe
parents
shouldn’t force their
children
instead
they should find activities to gain their
child’s
attention.
Overwhelming struggles of business world
usually
gets
in the way of
parents
and their
children
. When both
parents
have to
work for financial needs,
children
look outside to find the attention they need.
Because
on a daily basis, working
parents
aren’t available and even when they are at home, they are either tired of the work or there is always housework to do.
For example
, both of my
parents
were working and my mother would do
house
work when she
gets
back while my father would
watch
television complaining about his day, I had no choice
but
looking for friends to spend
time
and talk
because
they weren’t paying
enough
attention.
Moreover
, most
parents
forget they were a
child
once and
they
usually
overreact to their
children’s
actions or decisions. They are either over-protective about their
child
or
think
that they can’t do mistakes which overwhelms their
child
. Such
behaviours
lead the
child
to prefer to be with his/her friends and discuss their problem
instead
of their parents.
In conclusion
, even if
parents
are working, they should spare a proper amount of
time
for their
children
to have a quality family
time
.
Also
, they should be aware of their reactions might frighten their
children
and damage their relationship.
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23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes