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In recent times, loss of important personnels is becoming more prevalent among the current developing countries around the world.

In recent times, loss of important personnels is becoming more prevalent among the current developing countries around the world. This essay below will discuss the number of problems which are associated with this phenomenon, and put forward some solutions for the same. It is not indiscrenible that professionals are migrating from their own developing country to a developed one to reside, work, develop themseves in financial aspects, and also to acquire better life opportunities, thereby it lead to serious problems. Firstly, it have a considerbale negative impact on these countrys' economy.
In recent times, loss of
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important
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personnels
is becoming more prevalent among the
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current
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developing countries
around the world. This essay below will discuss the number of problems which
are associated
with this phenomenon, and put forward
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some
solutions for the same.

It is not
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indiscrenible
that professionals are migrating from their
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own
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developing country
to a developed one to reside, work, develop
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themseves
in financial aspects, and
also
to acquire better life opportunities, thereby it
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lead
to serious problems.
Firstly
, it
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have
a
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considerbale
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negative
impact on these
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countrys
' economy.

IELTS essay In recent times, loss of important personnels is becoming more prevalent among the current developing countries around the world.

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91 words
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