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As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom.

Nowadays computers play an indispensable role in human life. It is essential for every carriars for example accounting, engineering and architecture. It can be clear to seen that every office to need computers. Todays world many schools apply computers in teachings process. Education process has been easier as a result of computer invention which is reflect in a no job for teachers in the schools. Most of schools and universities use a computers and its softwares in educational process in which students can extend their choices in affiliate to learning. On the one hand they can choose their favorite teachers and there are not any restriction about education places and times. They can study every where and every hours which they want that is reflect in a teachers unemployment. That can be proposed which teachers give a consultant to students. On the other hand, there is no doubt that students can learn in a convient way in face to face education. In conclusion, teachers may loss their job because of computers coming in which it affict all parts of our life.

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carriars
for example
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clear
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seen
 that every office to need computers. It seems that a possessive apostrophe is missing.Today's
Todays
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many
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 of computer invention which is Consider using either the past participle “reflected” or the present participle “reflecting” here.reflectedreflecting
reflect
 in a no job for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlecturersupervisorscholarassistantprofessortutor
teachers
 in the schools.

After ‘Most of’, you should use ‘the’ (“Most of the schools”) or simply say “Most schools”.Most of the schoolsMost schools
Most of schools
 and universities This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
The plural noun “computers” cannot be used with the article “a”. Did you mean “a computer” or “computers”?a computercomputers
a computers
 and its In standard English, the noun “softwares” is uncountable. Consider using an alternative.pieces of softwaresoftware programssoftware productssoftware packages
softwares
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teachers
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every where
 and every The noun should probably be in the singular form: “hour”?hour
hours
 which they want that is
Consider using either the past participle “reflected” or the present participle “reflecting” here.reflectedreflecting
reflect
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teachers
 unemployment. That can be proposed
 which You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlecturersupervisorscholarassistantprofessortutor
teachers
 give a consultant to students. On the other hand
, there is no doubt that students can learn in a Possible spelling mistake found.convent
convient
 way in face to face education.

In conclusion
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlecturersupervisorscholarassistantprofessortutor
teachers
 may “loss” is a noun. Did you mean the verb “lose” (= ‘to lose’)?lose
loss
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because
 of computers coming in which it Possible spelling mistake found.affectafflict
affict
 all parts of our life. 