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In order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. To what extent do you agree? v.4

Higher education studies are required a high tuition fees. According to some, university education ought to be free for all students. I my opinion, I agree that tuition fees are must to be free for all students regardless of their ethinic or religious background. A good reason to abolish university fees is to ensuring equal rights for all citizens to study at college. For instance, citizens from poor backgrounds are prevented from apply at university. This consider discrimination against large segment of society from different ethincs and religious backgrounds. Another point to consider is a free university will help students to not to have work anymore. Namely, in the United Kingdom, more that 75 percent of higher education students are had part time or full time job in order to pay studying fees. By contrast, free university will ensures a better result in the academic career which there is no need to work afford tuition fees and that will enable them to spend time in their academic work. Finally, free university education will benefits society in the long run. This will increases the number of educated people in the society which will rises high level profficinals in their countries. Furthermore, educated people will bring economic advantages to many sectors in the society. This can consider a great kind of investment in people and has a great benefits in the long run. In conclusion, Free university education has many benefits in prompting equal rights, better academic career, and more economic advantages.
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. According to
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university
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ought to be
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students
.
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I
my opinion, I
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that tuition
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must to
be
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for all
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students
regardless of their
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ethinic
or religious background.

A
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reason to abolish
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university
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fees
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to ensuring
equal rights for all citizens to study at college.
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, citizens from poor backgrounds are
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prevented
from apply at
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university
.
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discrimination against large segment of
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from
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ethincs
and religious backgrounds.

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free
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university
will
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students
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to not to
have work anymore.
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, in the United Kingdom, more
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that
75 percent of higher
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education
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students
are had
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part time
or full time job in order to pay studying
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fees
. By contrast,
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free
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university
will
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ensures
a better result in the academic career which there is no need to work afford tuition
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fees
and that will enable them to spend time in their academic work.

Finally
,
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free
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university
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education
will
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benefits
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society
in the long run. This will
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increases
the number of educated
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people
in the
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society
which will rises high level
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profficinals
in their countries.
Furthermore
, educated
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people
will bring economic advantages to
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many
sectors in the
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society
. This can consider a great kind of investment in
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people
and has a great benefits in the long run.

In conclusion
,
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university
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education
has
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many
benefits in prompting equal rights, better academic career, and more economic advantages.
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IELTS essay in order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. not all students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
250 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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