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In order to stay healthy, I think we should do the following things

In order to stay healthy, I think we should do the following things 0AYa1

Nowadays, there are more and more fat people. This is harmful to our health. In order to stay healthy, I think we should do the following things First of all, we should have medical check-up regularly. This helps us find the diseases sooner. If so, it is easy for us to treat them Secondly, we should do morning exercises regularly. In the early morning, my father and I often go jogging. We jog about 2 kilometers every day Next, we should play sports such as football, volleyball, badminton…I like playing football. After school, I often play it with my friends at the mini stadium Finally, we should have a balanced-diet. This means: - Eat a moderate amount of fatty food and sugar. - Eat some body-building foods such as meat, fish and dairy product. - Eat plenty of cereals, fruits and vegetables. In short, if we follow above things, I think we will be stronger and healthier.

Nowadays, there are more and more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chubby
fat
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. This is harmful to our health. In order to stay healthy, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 we should do the following Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphthings.things!things?things:things,things;
things


This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, we should have medical This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
-up regularly
. This This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 us find the diseases sooner. If This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
, it is easy for us to treat Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphthem.them!them?them:them,them;
them


Secondly
, we should do morning exercises regularly
. In the early morning, my father and I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 go jogging. We jog about 2 kilometers every Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphday.day!day?day:day,day;
day


Next
, we should play sports such as football, volleyball, badminton…Add a space between sentences I
I
 like playing football. After school, I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 play it with my friends at the mini Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphstadium.stadium!stadium?stadium:stadium,stadium;
stadium


Finally
, we should have a balanced-diet. This means:

Consider using an m-dash in dialogues and enumerations.—
-
 Eat a moderate amount of fatty food and sugar.

Consider using an m-dash in dialogues and enumerations.—
-
 Eat This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 body-building foods such as meat, fish and dairy product.

Consider using an m-dash in dialogues and enumerations.—
-
 Eat This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
plenty
 of cereals, fruits and vegetables.

In short, if we follow above things, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 we will be stronger and healthier. 