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cooking food at home is a waste of time.fast food restaurants help in living a modern and less stressful life. do you agree or disagree?

cooking food at home is a waste of time. fast food restaurants help in living a modern and less stressful life. doyp7
It is considered by a few people that individual should have use resturant for rather than cooking at home because it is wastage of time. In mu opinion I am not agree with this statement because food which is available in restaurants is expensive and dangerous for health. It is clear that, resturant food is more expensive as compared to homemade food. For instance, in hotels nutrients is costlier because customer have to pay high tax. Besides this it can be say that every person not eat resturant food because everyone income is not same. The subsequent main reason is that this nourishment is not good for health such as each and everyone knows that a lot of chemical use for preparing restaurantal food. In addition, many restaurants do not take care of cleanliness. But some opponents appeal that eating in hotels is the sign of modern life style. It is said that cooking food at home is wastage of time, however, in resturant prepared food can be bought. Overall, Although certain people praised resturant food but according to me it has adverse impact on health
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people
that individual should have
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use
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resturant
for
rather
than cooking at home
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because
it is wastage of time. In mu opinion I am not
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agree
with this statement
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because
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food
which is available in restaurants is expensive and
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dangerous
for health. It is
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clear
that,
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resturant
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food
is more expensive as compared to homemade
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food
.
For instance
, in hotels nutrients is costlier
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because
customer
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have to
pay high tax.
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Besides
this it can be say that every person not eat
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resturant
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food
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because
everyone income is not same. The subsequent main reason is that this nourishment is not
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good
for health such as each and
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everyone
knows that
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a lot of
chemical
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use
for preparing
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restaurantal
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food
.
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,
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many
restaurants do not take care of cleanliness.
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But
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some
opponents appeal that eating in hotels is the
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sign
of modern life style. It
is said
that cooking
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food
at home is wastage of time,
however
, in
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resturant
prepared
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food
can be
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bought
.
Overall
, Although certain
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people
praised
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resturant
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food
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but
according to me it has adverse impact on health

IELTS essay cooking food at home is a waste of time. fast food restaurants help in living a modern and less stressful life.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
185 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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