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In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation.

In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. n6122
In an attempt to sort out traffic issues, Drivers ought to pay some amount of money replace of using special transport and the government should appraise this money to develop transportation. This essay will be discussed drawback and positive sides of this statementOne the one hand this statement has some negative effects. Due to this high tax, some amount of people can be deprived of host of private car. They lose their comfort. Consequently, the econonomy of world commercian is impressed this situation. İncome of speacial car 's purchasing became decrease. Recent survey in İndia indicate that this law damage most industry in the country especially car industry.
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IELTS essay In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation.

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108 words
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