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In order to solve the traffic problem, we need to make more roads. What’s your opinion?

In order to solve the traffic problem, we need to make more roads. What’s your opinion? 6N3Mr
Traffic congestion in many cities around the world has become a severe and worsening problem. Some individuals claim by building more roads, the difficulties of transportation will be reduced. I believe that pricing roads, providing high quality public transit systems and heightening fuel costs, beside developing roads, would be helpful in the managing this progress. Getting stuck in a traffic jam has been an annoying dilemma since many years ago. Some advocate that developing roads can solve this problem but, on one hand, the number of solitary car drivers is on the rise and on the other hand, the suitable areas for building new roads are limited. Also, the air pollution increasingly rises if the number of cars increase. Therefore, many systematic and scientific studies are required to find out the causes and solutions of the problem in any country, developed or not. One of the solutions could be pricing the roads- consists of levying a fee to circulate in or enter specific areas or streets during times when there is congestion there. Another way is heightening fuel prices to prevent solitary cars drivers commuting. Both raising in fuel and road prices might be annoying to most of private car drivers; so they will resort to using the public transit system. Other alternative way of using private cars is providing high quality public transportation system. Equipped buses and subway systems could be a solution to control traffic, especially in mega cities. The cheapness, cleanliness, convenience and accessibility are the features required to attract people to use these systems. Therefore, environmental pollutions caused by fumes spread across the country and the length of travels even will be reduced. To conclude, although developing roads could be considered as a solution to congestion problem, pricing roads and fuel, add on providing high quality transportation system may have considered as more efficient solutions, especially in crowded cities.
Traffic congestion in
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cities around the world has become a severe and worsening
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.
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individuals claim by building more
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roads
, the difficulties of transportation will be
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reduced
. I believe that pricing
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roads
, providing high quality public transit
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systems
and heightening
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fuel
costs, beside developing
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roads
, would be helpful in the managing this progress.

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years ago.
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Some
advocate that developing
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can solve this
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problem
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but
, on one hand, the number of solitary
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car
drivers is on the rise and
on the other hand
, the suitable areas for building new
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roads
are limited
.
Also
, the air pollution
increasingly
rises if the number of
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cars
increase.
Therefore
,
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many
systematic and scientific studies
are required
to find out the causes and
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solutions
of the
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problem
in any country, developed or not.

One of the
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solutions
could be pricing the
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roads-
consists of levying a fee to circulate in or enter specific areas or streets during times when there is congestion there. Another way is heightening
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fuel
prices to
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prevent
solitary
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drivers commuting. Both raising in
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fuel
and
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road
prices might be annoying to
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most of private
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car
drivers;
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they will resort to using the public transit
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system
. Other alternative way of using private
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cars
is providing high quality public transportation
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system
. Equipped buses and subway
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systems
could be a
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solution
to control traffic,
especially
in mega cities. The cheapness, cleanliness, convenience and accessibility are the features required to attract
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people
to
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these
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systems
.
Therefore
, environmental pollutions caused by fumes spread across the country and the length of travels even will be
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reduced
.

To conclude
, although developing
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could
be considered
as a
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solution
to congestion
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problem
, pricing
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roads
and
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fuel
,
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add
on providing high quality transportation
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may have considered as more efficient
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solutions
,
especially
in crowded cities.

IELTS essay In order to solve the traffic problem, we need to make more roads. What’s your opinion?

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