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In order to learn a language well, we should also learn about the country as well as the cultures and lifestyle of the people who speak this language, To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.?

In order to learn a language well, we should also learn about the country as well as the cultures and lifestyle of the people who speak this language, with this opinion. ? 8Al5
Language is the best means of communication. In today’s world, we are part of a global village and there is more interaction among people of different parts of globe than ever before. Therefore, some people believe that in order to learn a foreign language we ought to understand extensively about their country, history and people. I firmly agree with the statement and in my opinion, it does assist in better understanding of a language. Firstly, the factor which has compelled me to agree with the statement is that language is much more than just means of communication and it’s a combination of culture, identity and vision. It is like seeing the world from different eyes. For example: in sub-continent region, language changes in the course of few kilometers and one can experience an entirely different accent, pronunciation as you explore geographically. Therefore, knowledge of sentimentalities of people aids in better understanding of a dialect. Another point to mention is that understanding of dialects, accents and idioms of language can only be learnt if we take interest in the culture and lifestyle of the people. Accents, dialects can be an apt example; same words can be pronounced in many different ways or similar sentences can have multiple variety of idioms and slangs involved. Knowledge of such aspects certainly makes your indulgent better of a particular language. This is a very vivid example of how such factors support better understanding of a linguistic. To conclude, I decisively agree that custom, history, lifestyle of people holds an important factor in understanding of a particular language and one should undeniably indulge in having a grip of these aspects to have better overall understating.
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of
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different
parts of globe than ever
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.
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people
believe that in order to learn a foreign
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language
we ought to understand
extensively
about their country, history and
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people
. I
firmly
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agree
with the statement and in my opinion, it does assist in
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understanding
of a language.

Firstly
, the factor which has compelled me to
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agree
with the statement is that
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language
is much more than
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just
means of communication and it’s a combination of culture, identity and vision. It is like seeing the world from
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different
eyes.
For example
: in sub-continent region,
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language
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changes
in the course of few kilometers and one can experience an
entirely
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different
accent, pronunciation as you explore
geographically
.
Therefore
, knowledge of
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sentimentalities
of
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people
aids in
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understanding
of a dialect.

Another point to mention is that
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understanding
of dialects, accents and idioms of
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language
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if we take interest in the culture and lifestyle of the
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people
. Accents, dialects can be an apt example; same words can
be pronounced
in
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many
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different
ways or similar sentences can have multiple variety of idioms and
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slangs
involved. Knowledge of such aspects
certainly
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your indulgent
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language
. This is a
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very
vivid example of how such factors support
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better
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understanding
of a linguistic.

To conclude
, I
decisively
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agree
that custom, history, lifestyle of
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people
holds an
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important
factor in
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understanding
of a particular
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language
and one should
undeniably
indulge in having a grip of these aspects to have
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better
overall
understating.
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IELTS essay In order to learn a language well, we should also learn about the country as well as the cultures and lifestyle of the people who speak this language, with this opinion. ?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
279 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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