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I love Languages !  Since i was a kid i liked to listen to different languages, I was very curious about hearing many voices that are not from my language.

I love Languages! Since i was a kid i liked to listen to different languages, I was very curious about hearing many voices that are not from my language. 7x8n
I love Languages! Since i was a kid i liked to listen to different languages, I was very curious about hearing many voices that are not from my language. When i entered school i was very happy when we had a subject of a foreign language “ English “ i was doing marvelous until there was nothing left for me to learn, I was the best on my classes on English, one day in the university i met a Spanish Speaking Teacher who praised me and told me “ your English is really great, have you ever considered learning a different language? “ and then i started wondering and i began learning his language to impress him. However the summer vacation came and i started learning Spanish. Two months has passed and the summer vacation are over, i went to the English center looking for my English professor “ Pedro” to find out that he is gone! I was really shocked, and since that day until today, i kept learning Spanish hoping that one day i will meet Him and talk to him in Spanish.
I
love
Languages!

Since
i
was a kid
i
liked to listen to
different
languages
, I was
very
curious about hearing
many
voices that are not from my language.

When
i
entered school
i
was
very
happy when we had a subject of a foreign
language
English
i
was doing marvelous until there was nothing
left
for me to learn, I was the best on my classes on English, one day in the university
i
met a
Spanish Speaking
Teacher who praised me and
told
me
your English is
really
great, have you ever considered
learning
a
different
language
? “
and
then
i
started
wondering and
i
began
learning
his
language
to impress him.
However
the summer vacation came and
i
started
learning
Spanish.

Two months has passed and the summer vacation are over,
i
went to the English center looking for my English professor
Pedro” to find out that he
is gone
! I was
really
shocked, and since that day until
today
,
i
kept
learning
Spanish hoping that one day
i
will
meet
Him and talk to him in Spanish.
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IELTS essay I love Languages! Since i was a kid i liked to listen to different languages, I was very curious about hearing many voices that are not from my language.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
185 words
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