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In my opinion essay agree or disagree.

In my opinion essay agree or disagree. 25LKA
Quartine has effected many places, such as libraries. In my opinion they ought not to be shut this is a notion that. I agree with it. In the following paragraphs. I will show reasons for my viewpoint with real examples. We have suddenly had a problem which is called COVID19 and because of this many places have been closed day by day, but libraries should not be shuf it is because, it is clear that some people nomely older human beings can not use modern technologies in order to learn something online which means offline libraries are more beneficial for them compare with online one. Furthermore some students have a lot of challenges because we can not finds one rave books via online shopping centers and also some books which are on the internet are so costly. As a result of this some students can not buy them with the help of online shopping centers. It is time that We part put an end to must close the libraries. Because Inside the population maybe a lot of them. But libraries should not be shuf it is because they ought not be shut this is a notion that.
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Quartine
has effected
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many
places, such as libraries. In my opinion they ought not to
be shut
this is a notion that. I
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agree
with it. In the following paragraphs. I will
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show
reasons for my viewpoint with real examples. We have
suddenly
had a problem which
is called
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COVID19
and
because of this
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many
places have
been closed
day by day,
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but
libraries should not be
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shuf
it is
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because
, it is
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clear
that
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some
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people
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nomely
older human beings can not
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use
modern technologies in order to learn something
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online
which means offline libraries are more beneficial for them compare with
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online
one.
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Furthermore
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some
students have
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a lot of
challenges
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because
we can not
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finds
one rave books via
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online
shopping centers and
also
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some
books which are on the internet are
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so
costly.
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As
a result of this
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some
students can not
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buy
them with the
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help
of
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online
shopping centers. It is time that We part put an
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end
to
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must
close the libraries.
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Because
Inside the population maybe
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a lot of
them.
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libraries should not be
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shuf
it is
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because
they ought not
be shut
this is a notion that.

IELTS essay In my opinion essay agree or disagree.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
197 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
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