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In modern times the language of young people has become more coarse and rude. Often old people and social conservatives complain about these ‘bad’ habits. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In modern times the language of young people has become more coarse and rude. Often old people and social conservatives complain about these ‘bad’ habits. x2pw9
In recent times, the way young people communicate is being characterised by coarseness and vulgarity. Many conservatives and elderly people believe that these changes in language use are concerning. Although at times rude communication is not appropriate, I am of the opinion that in most cases, this kind of speaking is actually beneficial. There are several reasons why this rude form of communication could be considered problematic. First of all, swearing or using vulgar language is inappropriate and tactless in a variety of settings. Using this language around the elderly or sometimes even parents and bosses can cause offence. Furthermore, crude communication can make a bad impression in many circumstances. For example, when meeting someone for the first time in a work context, bad language can give a first impression of sloppiness and lack of professionalism. However, coarse and vulgar language actually has a number of significant advantages. One benefit is that speaking in a casual and rude way is a good way of ‘breaking the ice’. Sometimes swearing or using a double-entendre can allow people to relax and understand that everyone is equal. In addition, using bad language also gives the impression that a person is honest and real. If a person is coarse in their communication, they often seem more transparent and easier to trust. In conclusion, while in some contexts it is important to maintain appropriate levels of respect and formality in communication, I believe that coarse and rude language is more often than not useful for social interaction and thus is not a concern.
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conservatives and elderly
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believe that these
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are concerning
. Although at times
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rude
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is not appropriate, I am of the opinion that
in most cases
, this kind of speaking is actually beneficial.

There are several reasons why this
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rude
form of
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could
be considered
problematic.
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First of all
, swearing or using vulgar
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language
is inappropriate and tactless in a variety of settings. Using this
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language
around the elderly or
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sometimes
even parents and bosses can cause
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.
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, crude
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can
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bad
impression in
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circumstances.
For example
, when meeting someone for the
first
time in a work context,
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bad
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language
can give a
first
impression of sloppiness and lack of professionalism.

However
, coarse and vulgar
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language
actually has a number of significant advantages. One benefit is that speaking in a casual and
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rude
way is a
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way of ‘breaking the ice’.
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to relax and understand that everyone is equal.
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, using
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also
gives the impression that a person is honest and real. If a person is coarse in their
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, they
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seem more transparent and easier to trust.

In conclusion
, while in
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contexts it is
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important
to maintain appropriate levels of respect and formality in
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communication
, I believe that coarse and
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language
is more
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than not useful for social interaction and
thus
is not a concern.

IELTS essay In modern times the language of young people has become more coarse and rude. Often old people and social conservatives complain about these ‘bad’ habits.

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258 words
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