In these days and ages, it is true that people’s lifestyle has changed significantly. These changes bring about some benefits. However, I believe that the merits it offers are outweighed by its demerits.
On one hand, the new lifestyle has some certain values. Firstly, in terms of the economy. Normally, the husband is the breadwinner of the family and the wives stay at home and take good care of their children as well as do all the domestic tasks. However, under the influence of the foreign cultures, these days women can also bring home the bacon and partly contribute to the well-being of the family. In addition, since the total income of the family is increased, not only they are able to have a better living standard, but the children are also provided with a more quality education system.
On the other hand, I suppose the drawbacks of the shifting in behaviour would eclipse those analysed advantages. This is highly exemplified by the reduction of family bonding time. As the matter of fact, since the parents are busy focusing on their jobs, the time that they spend with their children and family in general will be shortened. As the result, their kids will lack of attention as well essential education from their parents, and they might end up being spoiled kids. Furthermore, the sentimental between the husband and wife will eventually go down because they do not spend enough of quality time together and this can lead to an unwanted result, which is divorced.
In conclusion, the upside of the new way of living is undeniable. Nevertheless, I would stand my point that the drawbacks of this behaviour are more significant.
In these days and ages, it is true that
people
’s lifestyle has
changed
significantly
. These
changes
bring about
some
benefits.
However
, I believe that the merits it offers
are outweighed
by its demerits.
On one hand, the new lifestyle has
some
certain values.
Firstly
, in terms of the economy.
Normally
, the husband is the breadwinner of the
family
and the wives stay at home and take
good
care of their children
as well
as do all the domestic tasks.
However
, under the influence of the foreign cultures, these days women can
also
bring home the bacon and partly contribute to the well-being of the
family
.
In addition
, since the total income of the
family
is increased
, not
only
they are able to have a better living standard,
but
the children are
also
provided with a more quality education system.
On the other hand
, I suppose the drawbacks of the shifting in
behaviour
would eclipse those
analysed
advantages. This is
highly
exemplified by the reduction of
family
bonding time. As the matter of fact, since the parents are busy focusing on their jobs, the time that they spend with their children and
family
in general
will
be shortened
. As the result, their kids will lack of attention
as well
essential education from their parents, and they might
end
up
being spoiled
kids.
Furthermore
, the sentimental between the husband and wife will
eventually
go down
because
they do not spend
enough
of quality time together and this can lead to an unwanted result, which
is divorced
.
In conclusion
, the upside of the new way of living is undeniable.
Nevertheless
, I would stand my point that the drawbacks of this
behaviour
are more significant.