In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion? v.52
In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion? v. 52
Although the demand for housing is increasing, there is no open space available for their construction except in the countryside. However, some people argue that the countryside should be protected from construction activity. I disagree with them. In my opinion, it is important to build homes on the outskirts of cities.
First and foremost, cities have become over crowded due to urbanization and free space is only available in the countryside. More and more people are migrating to cities for a better future and hence the space available for construction has already been used.
To meet this demand for land, people are turning to the countryside. Many customers also want to buy homes in the countryside because they are more affordable. Also, pollution is not really an issue in rural areas. Hence, people opting to live in the countryside can buy spacious homes built amidst natural greenery. In addition to this, if construction is done in the areas away from the city we can reduce the negative effects of urbanization. Due to overcrowding in cities, people face not only traffic congestion but also pollution. For example, in a South Indian city, a 40% improvement in air quality was observed after they started building homes in the peripheral areas of the city instead of in the centre. Thus, to improve the quality of life in the urban area it is a better solution.
However, there should be strict rules regarding the construction of homes in the countryside. Homes should be built with proper ventilation and there should be vegetation zones and free spaces between houses to prevent the bad impact of construction in those areas.
In conclusion, as population is continuously moving to cities for better prospects, there is a simultaneous increase in the demand for shelters. Therefore, the countryside can be utilised for this purpose and to curb the effects of overcrowding in cities.
Although the demand for housing is increasing, there is no open
space
available for their
construction
except in the
countryside
.
However
,
some
people
argue that the
countryside
should
be protected
from
construction
activity. I disagree with them. In my opinion, it is
important
to build
homes
on the outskirts of cities.
First
and foremost,
cities
have become over crowded due to urbanization and free
space
is
only
available in the
countryside
. More and more
people
are migrating to
cities
for a better future and
hence
the
space
available for
construction
has already been
used
.
To
meet
this demand for land,
people
are turning to the
countryside
.
Many
customers
also
want to
buy
homes
in the
countryside
because
they are more affordable.
Also
, pollution is not
really
an issue in rural
areas
.
Hence
,
people
opting to
live
in the
countryside
can
buy
spacious
homes
built amidst natural greenery.
In addition
to this, if
construction
is done
in the
areas
away from the city we can
reduce
the
negative
effects of urbanization. Due to overcrowding in
cities
,
people
face not
only
traffic congestion
but
also
pollution.
For example
, in a South Indian city, a 40% improvement in air quality
was observed
after they
started
building
homes
in the peripheral
areas
of the city
instead
of in the
centre
.
Thus
, to
improve
the quality of life in the urban
area
it is a better solution.
However
, there should be strict
rules
regarding the
construction
of
homes
in the
countryside
.
Homes
should
be built
with proper ventilation and there should be vegetation zones and free
spaces
between
houses
to
prevent
the
bad
impact of
construction
in those areas.
In conclusion
, as population is
continuously
moving to
cities
for better prospects, there is a simultaneous increase in the demand for shelters.
Therefore
, the
countryside
can be
utilised
for this purpose and to curb the effects of overcrowding in
cities
.
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38Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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