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In many parts of the world, water sources are becoming more polluted. What are the consequences of this problem? What can be done to combat it?

In many parts of the world, water sources are becoming more polluted. What are the consequences of this problem? What can be done to combat it? WQN0
Due to irresponsible actionso of people, water sources such as rivers, lakes, and oceans have been increasingly contaminated in different parts of the world. This essay will discuss the consequences of unclean water to marine biodiversity, as well as to human society. This essay will also suggest solutions to resolve this issue. Water is a source of life as it is primarily used for drinking. If the water is contaminated, there will be a huge shortage in drinking consumption which is supposed to be free for everyone. This is already evident in the capital city of the Philippines where Filipinos in every household must buy mineral water becuse there is no available clean and free water to drink. Secondly, acquatic life is greatly at risk when water is dirty and full of toxic materials like plastics and other rubbishes. Research shows that many marine speciess are put on grave danger because of waste materials being disposed in different bodies of water. For example, fishes and whales mistakenly eat plastics as their food. Hence, this causes death to many of sean animals. The government should implement laws that will help alleviate the water pollution problem. Since many plastics are found in oceans, public officials must start banning the use plastic and help promote the use of ecobags for every one. Also, additional payment must be imposed to consumers who want to use plastic bags for grocery shopping. Country leaders should also start educating each of their citizens on how to properly dispose garbage bags. For instance, Germany and South Korea are starting to fine their people if their trashes are not properly segrated. In conclusion, water is essential in everyday's life. However, the wrong doings of people to the environment has greatly impact many sources of water. People all over the world should start to work hand-in-hand to save our planet's water from being polluted for the sake of future generation.
Due to irresponsible
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people
,
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water
sources such as rivers, lakes, and oceans have been
increasingly
contaminated in
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different
parts of the world. This essay will discuss the consequences of unclean
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water
to marine biodiversity,
as well
as to human society. This essay will
also
suggest solutions to resolve this issue.

Water is a source of life as it is
primarily
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used
for drinking. If the
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water
is contaminated
, there will be a huge shortage in drinking consumption which
is supposed
to be free for everyone. This is already evident in the capital city of the Philippines where Filipinos in every household
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must
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buy
mineral
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water
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becuse
there is no available clean and free
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water
to drink.
Secondly
,
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acquatic
life is
greatly
at
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risk
when
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water
is dirty and full of toxic materials like
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plastics
and other rubbishes. Research
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shows
that
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many
marine
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speciess
are put
on grave
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danger
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because
of waste materials
being disposed
in
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different
bodies of
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water
.
For example
, fishes and whales
mistakenly
eat
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plastics
as their food.
Hence
, this causes death to
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many
of
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sean
animals.

The
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government
should implement laws that will
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help
alleviate the
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water
pollution problem. Since
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many
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plastics
are found
in oceans, public officials
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must
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start
banning the
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use
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plastic
and
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help
promote the
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use
of
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ecobags
for every one.
Also
, additional payment
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must
be imposed
to consumers who want to
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use
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plastic
bags for grocery shopping. Country leaders should
also
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start
educating each of their citizens on how to
properly
dispose garbage bags.
For instance
, Germany and South Korea are starting to fine their
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people
if their trashes are not
properly
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segrated
.

In conclusion
,
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water
is essential in
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everyday
's life.
However
, the
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wrong
doings of
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people
to the environment has
greatly
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impact
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many
sources of
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water
.
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People
all over the world should
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start
to work hand-in-hand to save our planet's
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water
from
being polluted
for the sake of future generation.
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IELTS essay In many parts of the world, water sources are becoming more polluted. What are the consequences of this problem? What can be done to combat it?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
320 words
6.0
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