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In many nations, people have to find work abroad.They have to left their family and friends. Do you think advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages.?

In many nations, people have to find work abroad. They have to left their family and friends. Do you think advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages. ? LBKLn
Owing to seeking for a job, individuals of several countries have to migrate apart from their loved ones to foreign cities. Although shifting to another country for working could have some drawbacks, it seems to me that the benefits of this vogue overtake them. The predominant tengible detrimental effect is that developing nation would not be able to prograss, due to this trend. To explicate it, should teachers and doctors go to abroad for attaining jobs, poor nations will deprive from basic amenities namely education and medication. For example, when people living in underprivileged nations suffer from a critical condition, they may have to rush into hospital of other countries because of scarcity of doctors in their home country. As a result, people could have to encounter such circumstances. Furthermore, migrated people may be mentally week as they would have no emotionally support of their beloved ones. Nevertheless, there are several benefits why people go to another country for working. Firstly, they would be able to find satisfactory job along with a handsome pay sacles. In other words, developed nations have various renowned companies in which people are paid double salary as compared to their home country. To exemplify, in recent years, approximately 20 lakh residents of indian have migrated to Canada for working purpose; consequently, they due to good salary are achieving their desires. Secondly, working on a international level has their own benefits. To elaborate it, if a person complete minimum two years of experince in a foreign country, he/she can be demanded widely. For example, needless to say, the demand of truck driver in the UAE is on the peak level as the heavy licence of this nation is acceptable internationly. Thus, it opens door for several opportunities. In conclusion, even though it could put a adeverse effect on the development of a poor country and psychology of a people migrating to another country, i, indeed, believe that it is more advantageous of migrated people because they can earn a telephone figure salary and get experince at an international level.
Owing to seeking for a job, individuals of several
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countries
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have to
migrate apart from their
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loved
ones to foreign cities. Although shifting to another
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country
for
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working
could have
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some
drawbacks, it seems to me that the benefits of this vogue overtake them.

The predominant
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tengible
detrimental effect is that developing
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nation
would not be able to
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prograss
, due to this trend. To explicate it, should teachers and doctors
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go to abroad
for attaining jobs, poor
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nations
will
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deprive from
basic amenities
namely
education and medication.
For example
, when
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people
living in underprivileged
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nations
suffer from a critical condition, they may
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have to
rush into hospital of other
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countries
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because
of scarcity of doctors in their home
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country
.
As a result
,
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people
could
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have to
encounter such circumstances.
Furthermore
, migrated
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people
may be mentally week as they would have no
emotionally
support of their beloved ones.

Nevertheless
, there are several benefits why
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people
go to another
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country
for
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working
.
Firstly
, they would be able to find satisfactory job along with a handsome pay
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sacles
.
In other words
, developed
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nations
have various renowned
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companies
in which
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people
are paid
double salary as compared to their home
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country
. To exemplify, in recent years, approximately 20 lakh residents of
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indian
have migrated to Canada for
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working
purpose;
consequently
, they due to
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good
salary are achieving their desires.
Secondly
,
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working
on
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a
international level has their
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own
benefits. To elaborate it, if a person complete minimum two years of
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experince
in a foreign
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country
, he/she can
be demanded
widely
.
For example
, needless to say, the demand of truck driver in the UAE is on the peak level as the heavy
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licence
of this
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nation
is acceptable
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internationly
.
Thus
, it opens door for several opportunities.

In conclusion
,
even though
it could put
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a
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adeverse
effect on the development of a poor
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country
and psychology of a
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people
migrating to another
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country
, i,
indeed
, believe that it is more advantageous of migrated
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people
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because
they can earn a telephone figure salary and
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get
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experince
at an international level.
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IELTS essay In many nations, people have to find work abroad. They have to left their family and friends. Do you think advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages. ?

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