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What you think Advantage and disadvantage of health

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It is true that today is a age of science and technology and here health plays a very major role in it there is some advantages and disadvantages of health In one hand myriad benefits of health are so much firstly if our health is good then we do any work with our full of energy and mind and there are less chance of mistakes when we do work with good health. For example In America there is a rule that everyone is to be fit and fine when they do work or if some one not well there salary will not be deducted from there monthly pay. Secondly without good health we feel so lazy ness and it divert our mind in our work. Finally it is said that if health is good every work do on time a
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IELTS essay What you think Advantage and disadvantage of health

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
139 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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