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In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this?

In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this? RpGo
Inferior quality of air and water is affecting people worldwide. Major reasons behind such quality degradation is lack of proper waste management technique from both industry and construction. This essay shall discuss reasons and preventive measures to maintain the quality index at minimum required level. Foremost reason behind declining quality is dumping and releasing industrial waste in canals and other water bodies. Not only it impurifies water it also affects all species dependent on that water including humans. Apart from that, when construction waste is collated they are either dumped in landfills or are sometimes released in air by burning those substances which ultimately results in polluting both air and land. For example, Industries who have operations with radioactive substances create such harmful waste which, when dumped under land, can cause effects which lasts for generations. One of the way to prevent such damage is by improving waste management technique say for example not throwing waste in main water bodies and dumping it in area where access to that water is minimal. But sometimes when use of such harmful substances cannot be avoided, proper disposal of such waste becomes important. For instance, burning of plastic, fuels and other substances which are responsible to increase sulphur and carbon proportion in air should be avoided or reduced. Also, for construction, companies should invest in eco-friendly machines and technology to control environmental damage. To conclude, it is quite necessary to maintain air and water quality index so people should be very alert and responsible while managing substances which can be harmful for environment.
Inferior
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quality
of
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air
and
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water
is affecting
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people
worldwide. Major reasons behind such
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quality
degradation is lack of proper
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waste
management technique from both industry and construction. This essay shall discuss reasons and preventive measures to maintain the
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quality
index at minimum required level.

Foremost reason behind declining
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quality
is dumping and releasing industrial
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waste
in canals and other
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water
bodies. Not
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only
it
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impurifies
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water
it
also
affects all species dependent on that
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water
including humans. Apart from that, when construction
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waste
is collated
they are either dumped in landfills or are
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sometimes
released in
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air
by burning those
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substances
which
ultimately
results in polluting both
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air
and land.
For example
, Industries who have operations with radioactive
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substances
create such harmful
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waste
which, when dumped under land, can cause effects which lasts for generations.

One of the way to
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prevent
such damage is by improving
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waste
management technique say
for example
not throwing
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waste
in main
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water
bodies and dumping it in area where access to that
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water
is minimal.
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But
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sometimes
when
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use
of such harmful
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substances
cannot
be avoided
, proper disposal of such
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waste
becomes
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important
.
For instance
, burning of plastic, fuels and other
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substances
which are responsible to increase
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sulphur
and carbon proportion in
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air
should
be avoided
or
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reduced
.
Also
, for construction,
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companies
should invest in eco-friendly machines and technology to control environmental damage.

To conclude
, it is quite necessary to maintain
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air
and
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water
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quality
index
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so
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people
should be
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very
alert and responsible while managing
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substances
which can be harmful for environment.

IELTS essay In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this?

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