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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas? dN8X
Nowadays the entertainment trend of society has become extremely popular with several crime novels and crime television dramas. People tend to get attracted to such books and shows because they think that part of the story belongs to their lives and the making of such shows are so natural that people start to believe in them. In my opinion, such shows sway the minds of the people thus making a negative impact on society. This essay will explain the consequences that occurred and its solutions. Books and TV shows are a favorite pastime of the people and these days people attract to books and TV dramas based on crime by relating their life instances to the story of the crime. The books and the shows involve a lot of nudity, violence and, robbery which people think will refresh them after a long day of work. However, crime-related books and tv shows contain content that is strictly targeted at a selected audience. These types of shows cannot be watched with the family. Also, people try to imitate the scenes after watching them, resulting in severe consequences for them and the society. For example, there have been many documented cases of schoolchildren performing unnatural acts on their classmates. Therefore, it has become more necessary to make the crime novels and the series made available only to the adult population of the society. I conclude, production houses or writers should create shows which have a beneficial effect on society. They have to make the TV shows by understanding that they have an influence on the people and hence should produce stories with reformatory effect on the society.
Nowadays the entertainment trend of
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society
has become
extremely
popular with several
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crime
novels and
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crime
television dramas.
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tend to
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get
attracted to such
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books
and
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shows
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because
they
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think
that part of the story belongs to their
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lives
and the making of such
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shows
are
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so
natural that
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people
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start
to believe in them. In my opinion, such
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shows
sway the minds of the
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people
thus
making a
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negative
impact on
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society
. This essay will
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explain
the consequences that occurred and its solutions.

Books and TV
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shows
are a favorite pastime of the
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people
and these days
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people
attract to
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books
and TV dramas based on
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crime
by relating their life instances to the story of the
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crime
. The
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books
and the
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shows
involve
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a lot of
nudity, violence and, robbery which
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people
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think
will refresh them after a long day of work.

However
, crime-related
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books
and
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tv
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shows
contain content
that is
strictly
targeted at a selected audience. These types of
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shows
cannot be
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watched
with the family.
Also
,
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people
try to imitate the scenes after watching them, resulting in severe consequences for them and the
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society
.
For example
, there have been
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many
documented cases of schoolchildren performing unnatural acts on their classmates.
Therefore
, it has become more necessary to
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make
the
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crime
novels and the series made available
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only
to the adult population of the society.

I conclude, production
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houses
or writers should create
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shows
which have a beneficial effect on
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society
. They
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have to
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make
the TV
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shows
by understanding that they have an influence on the
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people
and
hence
should produce stories with reformatory effect on the
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society
.
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IELTS essay In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
274 words
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