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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas? JrbE
Novels and Dramas are a part of life since technology came into the era, However the popularity of Crime Novels and Crime serials is increasing more in the many countries. I think that it is because of the increasing crime rate in country and believe that it is good to have some insight about that. First aspect of people's high interest in the crime books and TV serials is because they wanted to be aware of the different techniques which is followed by criminals to initiate the crime. If they are already prepared then they can get rid of it at the time of initiation. Most of the time people find it interesting to watch or reading the suspence in this. On the other hand criminal are also a part of our society and they can also have access to these books and TV programs in that case this brings ideas in there mind for the execution and also it has negative impact on the society that way people can think an easy ways to earn money which leads them to initiate the crime as sometimes these books shows only one aspect of this era not the end. So people will not think about the bad circumstances of happening to them after commiting crime only by reading a book. In conclusion, Crime books and Dramas had a major impact on the society but It is good to have such kind of things in the society so that people can have more knowledge about what is going on it the world.
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However
the popularity of
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Novels and
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serials is increasing more in the
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many
countries. I
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think
that it is
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because
of the increasing
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crime
rate in country and believe that it is
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good
to have
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some
insight about that.

First
aspect of
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people
's high interest in the
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crime
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books
and TV serials is
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because
they wanted to be aware of the
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different
techniques which
is followed
by criminals to initiate the
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crime
. If they are already prepared then they can
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get
rid of it at the time of initiation. Most of the time
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people
find it interesting to
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watch
or reading the
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suspence
in this.

On the other hand
criminal are
also
a part of our
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society and
they can
also
have access to these
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books
and TV programs
in that case
this brings
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ideas
in there mind for the execution and
also
it has
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negative
impact on the
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society
that way
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people
can
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think
an easy
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ways
to earn money which leads them to initiate the
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crime
as
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these
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books
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shows
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only
one aspect of this era not the
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.
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people
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think
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bad
circumstances of happening to them after
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commiting
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crime
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only
by reading a book.

In conclusion
,
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books
and Dramas had a major impact on the
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society
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but
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good
to have such kind of things in the
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society
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so
that
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people
can have more knowledge about what is going on it the world.
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IELTS essay In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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