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Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? dXLo
As there are lot of celebrities, politicians and actors who are very much famous in our country and these days most of the public have become commercial and people forget to keep few things in privacy especially the media. There personal life is shown to everyone which is in-appropriate. I believe that there should be a limitation in making most of things public. Firstly these days personal life of actors are portrait to public which is not correct, for instance recently there was news about the famous actor who gifted his wife a one crore diamond ring on his marriage. This was shown in social media all the day it is there personal life which should be kept private, even the actors should make sure they are not conveying this kind of information to media. Also in chat shows the host will ask most of their personal interests, clothing and what do they do in free time etc. which is inaccurate. Secondly, it does not mean that though they are famous, people take advantage of interfering in there private life, also telecast everything in newspapers or social media without their permission which is not at all acceptable. However these days everyone have become more commercial and public want all unnecessary information, to illustrate few days back in social media there was a rumor about one of the actor and politicians serious break ups. It is there private life whatever they can do but people take more interests in these rumors. To conclude there should be a boundary of what information should be spread across the media as famous people do have their private life and every individual has the right to keep it for themselves and media or the reporters should avoid to show there personal life in public.
As there are
lot of
celebrities, politicians and
actors
who are
very
much
famous
in our country and these days most of the
public
have become commercial and
people
forget to
keep
few things in privacy
especially
the
media
. There
personal
life
is shown
to everyone which is in-appropriate. I believe that there should be a limitation in making
most of things
public.

Firstly
these days
personal
life
of
actors
are portrait to
public
which is not correct,
for instance
recently there was news about the
famous
actor
who gifted his wife a one crore diamond ring on his marriage. This
was shown
in social
media
all the day it is there
personal
life
which should be
kept
private
, even the
actors
should
make
sure they are not conveying this kind of information to
media
.
Also
in chat
shows
the host will ask most of their
personal
interests, clothing and what do they do in free time etc. which is inaccurate.

Secondly
, it does not mean that though they are
famous
,
people
take advantage of interfering in there
private
life
,
also
telecast everything in newspapers or social
media
without their permission which is not at all acceptable.
However
these days everyone
have
become more commercial and
public
want all unnecessary information, to illustrate few days back in social
media
there was a rumor about one of the
actor
and politicians serious
break ups
. It is there
private
life
whatever they can do
but
people
take more interests in these rumors.

To conclude
there should be a boundary of what information should
be spread
across the
media
as
famous
people
do have their
private
life
and every individual has the right to
keep
it for themselves and
media
or the reporters should avoid to
show
there
personal
life
in
public
.
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IELTS essay Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life?

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4 paragraphs
299 words
6.0
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