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In Many Countries Today, Crime Novels And TV Crime Dramas Are Becoming More And More

In the above given statement that in almost all the seven continents of the world crime shows and novels are on higher ratings. People are not interested in crime shows rather than family or comedy programs. Every individual have different interest when we talk about books and TV shows. Plethora of people search for the material to watch or to read is based on something which involves transgression activities people the new generation wants material that is authentic and which has some logic and concepts. Most all the crime shows or crime fiction novels are based logics and authenticity. People now do not like typical family melodrama where all actress is crying. Everyday everywhere there is someone who is attempting illegal activities and they are not even punished we all are aware that in the end of the crime comics culprits will be hanged or be in prison this result makes people happy and satisfied that someday criminals will go through his or her punishment. In my view having an interest in crime fiction or shows has abundance of advantages on society. I personally prefer crime based shows. People think twice to attempt something against the law after watching or reading the end of the criminal after attempting offence activities. To conclude, everything contains its own advantages and disadvantages on individual and society it's our own choice how to accept things in a good or bad manner.
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crime
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Every individual have
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different
interest when we talk about books and TV
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shows
. Plethora of
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people
search for the material to
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watch
or to read
is based
on something which involves transgression activities
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people
the new generation wants material
that is
authentic and which has
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some
logic and concepts. Most all the
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crime
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shows
or
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crime
fiction novels
are based
logics and authenticity.
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People
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now
do not like typical family melodrama where all actress is crying.

Everyday everywhere there is someone who is attempting illegal activities and they are not even punished we all are aware that in the
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of the
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comics culprits will
be hanged
or be in prison this result
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makes
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people
happy and satisfied that someday criminals will go through
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punishment.

In my view having an interest in
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fiction or
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has abundance of advantages on society. I
personally
prefer
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crime
based
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shows
.
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twice to attempt something against the law after watching or reading the
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of the criminal after attempting offence activities.

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, everything contains its
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advantages and disadvantages on individual and society it's our
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choice how to accept things in a
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IELTS essay In Many Countries Today, Crime Novels And TV Crime Dramas Are Becoming More And More

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
237 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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