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In Many Countries There Is A Problem with Declining Quality Of Air And Water From Both Industry And Construction What measures could be taken to prevent this?

In Many Countries There Is A Problem with Declining Quality Of Air And Water From Both Industry And Construction What measures could be taken to prevent this? 6xLn0
In many nations, the mitigation of quality air and water has become a concern for both Industry and construction. Which can be prevented by manifesting a law and by utilizing a water recycling system. At this time, Industries are disposing water to the lakes and rivers to the sewage without treatment, as it is becoming a huge impact on society with people having an inadequate amount of water. It is undoubtedly that it would be beneficial for the government to instruct industries to construct a water recycling system. Moreover, this will not resolve the problem of recycling and reusing of water but also mitigate the reduction of water. For instance, Indonesia has a built-in water treatment and it is estimated that 60% of water is saved with the use of the respective treatment. Secondly, as construction is evolving this will eventually will not deter the menace of air pollution. To elucidate, debris and engine from the exhaust gases that comprise chemical substances such as carbon monoxide and nitrogen are especially harmful. Nevertheless, in order to eradicate the government must implement a rule, that will reduce high-level air pollution. For example, the USA government testify that in order to construct a certain building, it is ought to have a certificate of approval to confirm the reasonable amount of air pollution. To conclude, I affirm that industry must take responsibility for the treating of water and build a recycling system that ensures that the water is not declining, and the government has to exert(apply) a legislation to regulate the quantity of air pollution.
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and
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has become a concern for both
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Industry
and construction. Which can be
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prevented
by manifesting a law and by utilizing a
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water
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recycling
system.

At this time,
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Industries
are disposing
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water
to the lakes and rivers to the sewage without treatment, as it is becoming a huge impact on society with
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people
having an inadequate amount of
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water
. It is
undoubtedly
that it would be beneficial for the
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government
to instruct
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industries
to construct a
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water
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recycling
system.
Moreover
, this will not resolve the problem of
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recycling
and reusing of
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water
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but
also
mitigate the reduction of
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water
.
For instance
, Indonesia has a built-in
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water
treatment and it
is estimated
that 60% of
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water
is saved
with the
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use
of the respective treatment.

Secondly
, as construction is evolving this will
eventually
will not deter the menace of
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air
pollution. To elucidate, debris and engine from the exhaust gases that comprise chemical substances such as carbon monoxide and nitrogen are
especially
harmful.
Nevertheless
, in order to eradicate the
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government
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must
implement a
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rule
, that will
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reduce
high-level
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air
pollution.
For example
, the USA
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government
testify that in order to construct a certain building, it is ought to have a certificate of approval to confirm the reasonable amount of
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air
pollution.

To conclude
, I affirm that
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industry
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must
take responsibility for the treating of
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water
and build a
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recycling
system that ensures that the
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water
is not declining, and the
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government
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has to
exert(apply) a legislation to regulate the quantity of
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air
pollution.
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IELTS essay In Many Countries There Is A Problem with Declining Quality Of Air And Water From Both Industry And Construction What measures could be taken to prevent this?

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