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in many countries, the cost of living is on the rise. what efects do higher prices have on individuals and society. what can be done to solve those problems

in many countries, the cost of living is on the rise. what efects do higher prices have on individuals and society. what can be done to solve those problems 2RyOM
The growing cost of living is a widespread problem across the world. This tendency, in my opinion, may have a variety of effects on individuals and society. There are, however, some answers to these issues. On the one hand, rising living costs have a variety of effects on individuals and society. On a personal level, individuals will confront several challenges and impediments in their everyday expenditures such as transportation, utility bills, food, and renting a dwelling, among other things. As a result, in order to earn more money to meet their monthly demands, people must work harder and longer hours, which has a negative impact on their health. On the contrary, the rich-poor divide is growing more visible in society. Wealthier individuals spend a lot of money to meet their high living expectations, whilst the impoverished must work full-time to get by. On the other side, there are options for dealing with rising living costs. To begin, the government must stabilize the pricing of vital products such as food and utility bills in order to limit market price increases. Furthermore, they should give public subsidies for basic necessities like as healthcare. Some industrialized countries, for example, provide free healthcare and education. Additionally, there should be worldwide standards governing wages and working conditions. Finally, the government should boost labor productivity and necessary services in order to satisfy everyone's societal needs. To summarize, there are several detrimental effects of rising living costs on both people and communities. To deal with this tendency, the government must have appropriate remedies in place.
The growing
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of
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is a widespread problem across the world. This tendency, in my opinion, may have a variety of effects on
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individuals
and society. There are,
however
,
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some
answers to these issues.

On the one hand, rising
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living
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costs
have a variety of effects on
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individuals
and society. On a personal level,
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individuals
will confront several challenges and impediments in their everyday expenditures such as transportation, utility bills, food, and renting a dwelling, among other things.
As a result
, in order to earn more money to
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meet
their monthly demands,
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people
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must
work harder and longer hours, which has a
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negative
impact on their health.
On the contrary
, the rich-poor divide is growing more visible in society. Wealthier
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individuals
spend
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a lot of
money to
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meet
their high
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living
expectations, whilst the impoverished
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must
work full-time to
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get
by.

On the other side, there are options for dealing with rising
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living
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. To
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, the
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government
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must
stabilize the pricing of vital products such as food and utility bills in order to limit market price increases.
Furthermore
, they should give public subsidies for
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basic necessities
like as healthcare.
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Some
industrialized countries,
for example
, provide free healthcare and education.
Additionally
, there should be worldwide standards governing wages and working conditions.
Finally
, the
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government
should boost labor productivity and necessary services in order to satisfy everyone's societal needs.

To summarize
, there are several detrimental effects of rising
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living
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costs
on both
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people
and communities. To deal with this tendency, the
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government
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must
have appropriate remedies in place.
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IELTS essay in many countries, the cost of living is on the rise. what efects do higher prices have on individuals and society. what can be done to solve those problems

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