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today is Tuesday . Hoa told me about a fact.

today is Tuesday. Hoa told me about a fact. Lb5xV
today is Tuesday. Hoa told me about a fact. To have a beautiful appearance as she is now, she had to practice a lot and follow a reasonable diet, eat and sleep. Before, she was very fat, her clothes were tight. Every day she takes time to practice for about 30 minutes. She jumps rope, runs and drinks a lot of water. Losing weight was difficult for her, but she did it. She is amazing. Well, I think it depend on company’s needs. If company’s needs is communication and collaboration between employees, managers, and leadership, the company will have a tendency favored open office space. But For financial services, hedge funds and law firms, the traditional office space layout is usually best. Because Traditional office spaces don’t only give employees quiet, but also private offices or areas to work and handle clients and confidential information, as well as collaborative, shared space. Beside, the infographic Contiguous Office Space, Shared Office Space
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today
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Hoa
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me about a fact. To have a
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beautiful
appearance as she is
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now
, she had to practice a lot and follow a reasonable diet, eat and sleep.
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Before
, she was
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very
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fat
, her clothes were tight. Every day she takes time to practice for about 30 minutes. She jumps rope, runs and drinks
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a lot of
water. Losing weight was difficult for her,
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but
she did it. She is amazing. Well, I
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it depend on
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company
’s needs. If
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company
’s needs is communication and collaboration between employees, managers, and leadership, the
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company
will have a tendency favored open
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office
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.
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But
For financial services, hedge funds and law firms, the traditional
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office
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layout is
usually
best.
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Because
Traditional
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office
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don’t
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only
give employees quiet,
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but
also
private
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offices
or areas to work and handle clients and confidential information,
as well
as collaborative, shared
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space
. Beside, the infographic Contiguous
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Office
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Space
, Shared
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Office
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Space
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IELTS essay today is Tuesday. Hoa told me about a fact.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
159 words
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