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In many countries, small shops are closing. Why this is happening? Is it a positive or negative development?

In many countries, small shops are closing. Why this is happening? Is it a positive or negative development? RNwGY
A business runs with the involvement of groups of individuals either it is small or big. It has been seen that local traders are shutting down their enterprises in various countries. I propound that closing of small business have multifarious reasons such as the liberalization of the economy and foreign investment also wothwhile for growth. This essay shall discuss the reasons of declining small shops and how it has a beneficial progress. one of the prime reasons of winding up of local traders is broadening the economy and foreign investment. Competitive price and fair deals pushing down to close small enterprises. For example, Amazon is an enormous multinational company which gave attractive price and best deals to buy products. Hence, such incients have a major impact of closening the small enterprises. In addition, because of large quantities products became cheaper which leads to rapid economy growth. Undoubtly, declining in small enterprises has numerous pros in growth of countries ubiquitously. Amalgamation of a range of products and cost effectiveness is made an individual's life easy. People can go under one roof and compare the prices and qualities before buying. For instance, Big Bazzar sells complete groceries, clothing, electronic and furniture where people do not need to visit different places. Therefore, such pros entirely beneficial to mankind. Furthermore, time saving is the another major factor where people prefer to visit large stores because of hectic schedule over small shops. To conclude, declining in small enterprises have many reasons such as economical and time saving. It is undoubtly beneficial to communities and countries development.
A business runs with the involvement of groups of individuals either it is
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small
or
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big
. It has been
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seen
that local traders are shutting down their
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enterprises
in various countries. I propound that closing of
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small
business have multifarious
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reasons
such as the liberalization of the economy and foreign investment
also
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wothwhile
for growth. This essay shall discuss the
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reasons
of declining
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small
shops and how it has
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.

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one
of the prime
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reasons
of winding up of local traders is broadening the economy and foreign investment. Competitive price and
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fair
deals pushing down to close
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small
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enterprises
.
For example
, Amazon is an enormous multinational
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company
which gave attractive price and best deals to
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buy
products.
Hence
, such
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incients
have a major impact of
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closening
the
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small
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enterprises
.
In addition
,
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because
of large quantities products became cheaper which leads to rapid economy growth.

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Undoubtly
, declining in
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small
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enterprises
has numerous pros in growth of countries
ubiquitously
. Amalgamation of a range of products and
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cost effectiveness
is made
an individual's life easy.
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People
can go under one roof and compare the prices and qualities
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before
buying.
For instance
,
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Big
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Bazzar
sells complete groceries, clothing, electronic and furniture where
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people
do not need to visit
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different
places.
Therefore
, such pros
entirely
beneficial to mankind.
Furthermore
, time saving is the another major factor where
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people
prefer to visit large stores
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because
of hectic schedule over
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small
shops.

To conclude
, declining in
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small
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enterprises
have
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many
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reasons
such as economical and time saving. It is
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undoubtly
beneficial to communities and countries development.
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IELTS essay In many countries, small shops are closing. Why this is happening? Is it a positive or negative development?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
261 words
6.0
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