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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

: Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? XGEBA
21st Generation is of modern era with advance technologies and ease of life of people. With all technological advancements, human life has become more and more mechanical and dependent on machineries and has made the entire generation more and more lethargic and lazy. Major reasons for increase in waste in these times are increased industrial wastage, lack of human intention to recycle products/reuse products and lower awareness among people for environmental damage. There is higher dependency of manufacturing activities and with increase in population, the scale of activities has increased multifold. Thus with increase in consumption, there is large scale production of conusmer goods to industrial, from chemicals to textiles, which has raised the emission of waste levels to new heights and has put the administrations to trouble to manage this significantly increased industrial waste. Secondly, but perhaps most critical is no motivation among the people of this generation to reuse and/or recycle products to reduce end garbage. Very pertinent issue for this increase plastic waste, as high amount of single use plastics are in the market and there is lack of awareneess and intention among people to resue plastic as freqeuntly as possible. Good example of this would encouragement provided by malls, and govt intitiatives to reuse plastic bags for shopping and avail discounts, recycle of waste pet bottles of water/cold drinks being done in the same industry. It is high time that governments should consider options of utilizing plastic and other waste for construction, infrastructure and roads. While other liquid and semi solid waste would be utilized for agri and other commercial purpose. Governments should run schemes in conjuction with private companies to help co-ordination of these wastes to put to productive use and benefit those private players by way of tax exemptions. Benefits to end consumers should be be given to reuse plastic products, recycle of water utilization in house hold puroposes and other activities at large.
21st Generation is of modern era with advance technologies and
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ease
of life of
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people
. With all technological advancements, human life has become more and more mechanical and dependent on
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machineries
and has made the entire generation more and more lethargic and lazy.

Major reasons for
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increase
in
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waste
in these times
are increased
industrial wastage, lack of human intention to
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recycle
products/reuse products and lower awareness among
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people
for environmental damage.

There is higher dependency of manufacturing activities and with
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increase
in population, the scale of activities has increased
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multifold
.
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Thus
with
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increase
in consumption, there is large scale production of
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conusmer
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goods
to industrial, from chemicals to textiles, which has raised the emission of
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waste
levels to new heights and has put the administrations to trouble to manage this
significantly
increased industrial waste.

Secondly
,
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but
perhaps most critical is no motivation among the
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people
of this generation to reuse and/or
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recycle
products to
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reduce
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end
garbage.
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Very
pertinent issue for this
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increase
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plastic
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waste
, as high amount of single
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use
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plastics
are in the market and there is lack of
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awareneess
and intention among
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people
to
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resue
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plastic
as
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freqeuntly
as possible.
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Good
example of this would encouragement provided by malls, and govt
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intitiatives
to reuse
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plastic
bags for shopping and avail discounts,
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recycle
of
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waste
pet bottles of water/
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cold
drinks
being done
in the same industry.

It is high time that
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governments
should consider options of utilizing
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plastic
and
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other
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waste
for construction, infrastructure and roads. While
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other
liquid and
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semi solid
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waste
would
be utilized
for
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agri
and
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other
commercial purpose.
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Governments
should run schemes in
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conjuction
with private
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companies
to
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help
co-ordination of these
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wastes
to put to productive
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use
and benefit those private players by way of tax exemptions. Benefits to
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end
consumers should be
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be
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given
to reuse
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plastic
products,
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recycle
of water utilization in
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house
hold
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puroposes
and
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other
activities at large.
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IELTS essay : Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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  American English
5 paragraphs
320 words
5.5
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