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In many countries people go to the shopping malls for entertainment

In many countries people go to the shopping malls for entertainment 8Qr7G

Different countries have different traditions, life style. Some countries can't afford thier food, some countries can launch rocket into space. As IT sphere is developing in very fast pace. Purchasing house hold items will be available online. But this does not mean that all sales departments are going to be closed. Do you agree that shops are going to change its direction and be entertainment center instead? As people constantly keep trying to improve their life. They accomplished very well so far. As a result, they may end up in having nothing to do most of a day. Which, it is good idea to spent some time with beloved ones entertaining. On the other hand, some people may not prefer wandering around purposelessly. Overall. It depends on what people prefer. In my opinion, most people like roaming on shops.

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