Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

In many countries, people do not recycle their rubbish as much as they could. v.2

In many countries, people do not recycle their rubbish as much as they could. v. 2
Many countries, do not recycle waste as much as possible. This essay will discuss the main reasons why this has happened and show the effects of the problem. Lack of facilities and lack of time are the main reasons of waste recycle. Some people throw away their garbage without recycling because they aren't enough facilities that they separate it. In many countries, people do not recycle their rubbish as much as they could Also, they realize which have to distance wet and dry waste, but they aren't recycling bin that they do it. As an example, the Mazandaran people who live in north Iran like recycling their rubbish, but there are not have a enough recycle bin about the subject. However, people don't have adequate time about recycling their rubbish. They prefer to use something which convenient and easy access such as plastic. For instance, mums who work outside home use plastic containers because it's not necessary to wash dishes and they don't worry about it breaking down. Lack of recycling can increase waste resources and destroy of soil which are the main effect of problems. Today, lack of time is the most important effect of waste resources of nature. Use excessive of plastic and papers which are disposable will cause many factories more and more products it. The statistics show, many manufacturing companies in all over the world more and more products plastic or papers for using people. For example, there are many factories in America that hard try to produce appliances disposable; so, they need to use more resources like trees for products paper devices. Also destroy of soil is the most main occupation many people. They more production rubbish while this work will cause destroy of soil. Some trash like plastic or paper that are left on the ground this is while that It will take a century for these materials to decompose. For simple, when people throw away their rubbish In different places like seas or forests this garbage remains in nature Which damages the soil for its natural degradation. In conclusion, shortage of facilities and lack of time are the main cause and soil destruction and waste of resources are effective right not recycling.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Many
countries, do not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycle
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
as much as possible. This essay will discuss the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
main
reasons why this has happened and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
the effects of the problem.

Lack of facilities and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lack
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
are the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
main
reasons of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycle
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
throw away their garbage without
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they aren't
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
facilities that they separate it. In
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
countries,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
do not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycle
their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rubbish
as much as they could

Also
, they realize which
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
distance wet and dry
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
they aren't
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
bin that they do it. As an example, the
Possible spelling mistake found.
Mazandaran
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in north Iran like
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rubbish
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
there are not have
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycle
bin about the subject.
However
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
don't have adequate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
about
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rubbish
. They prefer to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
something which convenient and easy access such as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plastic
.
For instance
,
Possible spelling mistake found.
mums
who work outside home
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plastic
containers
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it's not necessary to wash
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
dishes and
they don't worry about it breaking down.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Lack
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
can increase
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
resources and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
destroy
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
soil
which are the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
main
effect of problems.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Today
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lack
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
is the most
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
effect of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
resources of nature.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Use
excessive of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plastic
and papers which are disposable will cause
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
factories more and more products it. The statistics
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
manufacturing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
in all over the world more and more products
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plastic
or papers for using
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
.
For example
, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
factories in America that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
try to produce appliances disposable;
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
, they need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
more resources like trees for products paper devices.
Also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
destroy
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
soil
is the most
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
main
occupation
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
. They more production
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rubbish
while this work will cause
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
destroy
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
soil
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
trash like
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plastic
or paper that are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
on the ground this is while that It will take a century for these materials to decompose. For simple, when
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
throw away their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rubbish
In
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
places like seas or forests this garbage remains in nature Which damages the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
soil
for its natural degradation.

In conclusion
, shortage of facilities and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lack
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
are the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
main
cause and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
soil
destruction and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
of resources are effective right not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
51Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay In many countries, people do not recycle their rubbish as much as they could. v. 2

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
369 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts


Recent posts