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In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Rapid Growth of Smart phone brands Elevated in spending on Mobile applications in mass than before, It became Quiet common in every individual around the world, irrespective of rich or poor. Obviously advantages outnumbered the disadvantages, I will be discussing further on this in following Essay. We are in Era of Technology and Artificial Intelligence and Human Being is inclined towards it, and one of them is Smart phone and its applications. There are so many companies developing large number of mobile and laptop Applications such as Gaming, education, health, Etc. There are plethora of advantages from applications, Now a days most Parents are tend to buy education related application for their children which help them in explaining complex Math solution and other subjects. Moreover In same way in this Busy scheduled life people are Spending on health related Apps to get Diet and exercise related information and doing their workout at home instead of going Gym which In turn help them safe travel time. All most all Application are paid which are very useful for in day to day life, However there are also some major disadvantages of this mobile application such as health problems too, much spending. people are getting addicted to this and spending unnecesscary too much beyond their Limit due to increase in usage Credit card limit. This introduction of new Gaming application every now and then effecting kids heath mentally and physically as they are feeling fatigu, physically inactive and mentally stress. In conclusion spending on mobile applications have many advantages and less disadvantage.
Rapid Growth of
Smart phone
brands Elevated in
spending
on Mobile
applications
in mass than
before
, It became Quiet common in every individual around the world, irrespective of rich or poor.
Obviously
advantages outnumbered the disadvantages, I will be discussing
further
on this in following Essay.

We are in Era of Technology and Artificial Intelligence and Human Being
is inclined
towards it, and one of them is
Smart phone
and its
applications
. There are
so
many
companies
developing large number of mobile and laptop
Applications
such as Gaming, education, health, Etc. There are plethora of advantages from
applications
,
Now a days
most Parents are
tend
to
buy
education related
application
for their children which
help
them in explaining complex Math solution and other subjects.
Moreover
In same way in this Busy scheduled life
people
are
Spending
on health related Apps to
get
Diet and exercise related information and doing their workout at home
instead
of going Gym which In turn
help
them safe travel time. All most all
Application
are paid
which are
very
useful for in day to day life,

However
there are
also
some
major disadvantages of this mobile
application
such as health problems too, much
spending
.
people
are getting addicted to this and
spending
unnecesscary
too much beyond their Limit due to increase in usage Credit card limit. This introduction of new Gaming
application
every
now
and then effecting kids heath mentally and
physically
as they are feeling
fatigu
,
physically
inactive and mentally
stress
.

In conclusion
spending
on mobile
applications
have
many
advantages and less disadvantage.
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IELTS essay In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?

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