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Advertisement is the key marketing startegy followed by small to large companies throughout the world for various reasons, mostly used for promoting the prodcut, increase the sales and in some cases its used for informational purposes. Whether advertisement influence people in buying or not is debetable, let's explore both the cases in this essay. Advertisement is not something new, that has been used since long time to promote and sell products, only thing with the advancement of technolgy the startegy and content delivery changed. Many compaines started investing lot in understanding user needs uisng machine learning techniques and showing the relevant products to the user's social media page or internet. Cognitive and pshycological factors also used in advertisements that increases the buyers percentage. Many people feels advertisements really helps them in getting latest product news, promotions and also in comparing the products. To contrasts, there are some segment of people belive advertisements is very generic and that has no effect on their decesions. They usually spent time in researching the product by discussing with their friends, families and review the items. Some times they visit the shops directly in enquring or call the hotlines to know more. There is nothing worng in skipping the ads and spend time / energy in researching the product in the market, but we have to accept the fact that the world has changed a lot, there a lot of companies selling same prodcuts that too with different flavours and numerous versions, choosing one among the fast changing life cycle is very difficult for the consumers. Companies also introducing someting new very often to keep their customers happy and in increasing their profit, some times they do discount offers in the advertisements to boost their sales. In my opinion those who don't follow ads will be spending more time in researching or they will be missing the deals / offers.
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is the key marketing
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startegy
followed by
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small
to large
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companies
throughout the world for various reasons,
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used
for promoting the
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prodcut
, increase the sales and in
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some
cases
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used
for informational purposes. Whether
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influence
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people
in buying or not is
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debetable
,
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's explore both the cases in this essay.

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used
since long
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time
to promote and sell
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products
,
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only
thing with the advancement of
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technolgy
the
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startegy
and content delivery
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changed
.
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compaines
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started
investing lot in understanding user needs
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uisng
machine learning techniques and showing the relevant
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products
to the user's social media page or internet. Cognitive and
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pshycological
factors
also
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used
in
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advertisements
that increases the
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buyers
percentage.
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people
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feels
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really
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helps
them in getting
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product
news, promotions and
also
in comparing the products.

To contrasts, there are
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some
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of
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people
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is
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generic and that has no effect on their
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decesions
. They
usually
spent
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time
in researching the
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product
by discussing with their friends, families and review the items.
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Some
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times
they visit the shops
directly
in
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enquring
or call the hotlines to know more.

There is nothing
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worng
in skipping the ads and spend
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/ energy in researching the
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product
in the market,
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we
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accept the fact that the world has
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changed
a lot, there
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companies
selling same
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prodcuts
that too with
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different
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and numerous versions, choosing one among the
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fast
changing life cycle is
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difficult for the consumers.
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also
introducing
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new
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to
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keep
their customers happy and in increasing their profit,
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some
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times
they do discount offers in the
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advertisements
to boost their sales. In my opinion those who don't follow ads will be spending more
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time
in
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researching or
they will be missing the deals / offers.
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IELTS essay Printed newspaper or books vs online

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
315 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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