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In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?

In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. e93B
Smoking has become a serious concern all over the world. Many nations are, in fact, are restricting the usage of cigarettes in public places and encourage such people to leave the building, which seems fair to them. This essay will argue the possible reasons which support this statement and my reasons which are in support of this. By acknowledging the fact smoking is an addictive attribute, people who do this purposefully are well aware of its health consequences. They are justifiable in the sense that addiction creates an urge to smoke and thus, they become unaware of the location. The majority of the public places have separate smoking zones, which prevent them to face humiliation, however, some regions or corporate buildings lack such arrangements. For instance, a recent survey stated that around 40 percent of addicts take location into account while taking a puff. In short, addiction is something that drives them to smoke, despite knowing all the ill-effects of it. How convincing their reasons may seem, it is still unfair for non-smokers, because standing beside such persons results in a passive form of having the same ingredients which they used to consume actively. Recent research, for example, by Harvard states that about 60% of non-smokers get their lungs infected just because they remained in contact with the chain-smokers. Overall, in order to prevent a person's health, it is advisable not to consume any smoke particulates as it also has an adverse impact on the brain, along with the lungs. In Conclusion, I agree that smoking, at any cost, should be banned in public, which ultimately results in living a more healthy and prosperous life.
Smoking
has become a serious concern all over the world.
Many
nations are, in fact, are restricting the usage of cigarettes in public places and encourage such
people
to
leave
the building, which seems
fair
to them. This essay will argue the possible reasons which support this statement and my reasons which are in support of this.

By acknowledging the fact
smoking
is an addictive attribute,
people
who do this
purposefully
are well aware of its health consequences. They are justifiable in the sense that addiction creates an urge to smoke and
thus
, they become unaware of the location. The majority of the public places have separate
smoking
zones, which
prevent
them to face humiliation,
however
,
some
regions or corporate buildings lack such arrangements.
For instance
, a recent survey stated that around 40 percent of addicts take location into account while taking a puff. In short, addiction is something that drives them to smoke, despite knowing all the ill-effects of it.

How convincing their reasons may seem, it is
still
unfair for non-smokers,
because
standing beside such persons results in a passive form of having the same ingredients which they
used
to consume
actively
. Recent research,
for example
, by Harvard states that about 60% of non-smokers
get
their lungs infected
just
because
they remained in contact with the chain-smokers.
Overall
, in order to
prevent
a person's health, it is advisable not to consume any smoke particulates as it
also
has an adverse impact on the brain, along with the lungs.

In Conclusion
, I
agree
that
smoking
, at any cost, should
be banned
in public, which
ultimately
results in living a more healthy and prosperous life.
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IELTS essay In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
275 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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