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In many countries crimes rates among younger people has been rising discuss the causes and solution for discuss the causes and solution for this

In many countries crimes rates among younger people has been rising discuss the causes and solution for discuss the causes and solution for this ke95R
Illegal activities has been in inclined by younger generation in various notions. This essay will examined issues or how to protect from that hurdles. To embark with, There are multifarious reason of increasing number in crimes. The major one is poverty. To explain it, Residing in middle class families is convincing to the young individual to do robbery. Besides the reason, In early age people suffer from education system as well as financial situations, which will be encouraged to become gangster and to join bad company. Moreover, The numbers of masses have bad addition of drugs that is the second obstacle of legal activity. To eleborate it, pills are being taken by youth masses taking too much drugs is make them Thief in this condition. They has been keeping burglary money from their homes or doing murders. Therefore, In future young individual will not Flourish their desires goals because of crimes. Despite having cause of offence there is plethora protection of extinct crimes. The dominant that behaviour of the society or parents. To elaborate it, In present time, Some people are living in different environment. Parents and communities behave in good manners, which would be beneficial for young masses because, They also want to be become as like them. however, Young individual will be motivated by their trainers and civilizations. Apart from this, Education must be mandatory for youth people owing to education plays vital role in our life without knowledge young cannot be learn positive or negative impacts. Not only this, if the education will provide of individual then they could be know about each and every concept without any harassment. consequences, Government should make strict rule regulation regarding to to criminal activities. To sum up, Crime has been rising lack of money. this condition can be solved by good environment among with rules
Illegal activities has been in inclined by younger generation in various notions. This essay will
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examined
issues or how to protect from that hurdles. To embark with, There are multifarious reason of increasing number in
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crimes
. The major one is poverty. To
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explain
it, Residing in middle
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class
families is convincing to the
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young
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individual
to do robbery.
Besides
the reason, In early age
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people
suffer from
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education
system
as well
as financial situations, which will
be encouraged
to become gangster and to
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join
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bad
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company
.
Moreover
, The numbers of masses have
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bad
addition of drugs
that is
the second obstacle of legal activity. To
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eleborate
it, pills are
being taken
by youth masses taking too
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much
drugs is
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make
them Thief in this condition. They
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has
been keeping burglary money from their homes or doing murders.
Therefore
, In future
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young
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individual
will not Flourish their desires goals
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because
of
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crimes
. Despite having cause of
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offence
there is plethora protection of extinct
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crimes
. The dominant that
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behaviour
of the society or parents. To elaborate it, In present time,
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Some
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people
are living in
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different
environment. Parents and communities behave in
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good
manners, which would be beneficial for
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young
masses
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because
, They
also
want to
be become
as like them.
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however
,
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Young
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individual
will
be motivated
by their trainers and civilizations. Apart from this,
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Education
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must
be mandatory for youth
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people
owing to
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education
plays vital role in our life without knowledge
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young
cannot be
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learn
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positive
or
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negative
impacts. Not
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only
this, if the
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education
will provide of
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individual
then they could be
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know
about each and every concept without any harassment.
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consequences
,
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Government
should
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make
strict
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rule
regulation
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regarding to
to criminal activities. To sum up,
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Crime
has been rising lack of money.
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this
condition can
be solved
by
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good
environment among with
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rules
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IELTS essay In many countries crimes rates among younger people has been rising discuss the causes and solution for discuss the causes and solution for this

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