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IN MANY CITIES,POPULATION IS INCREASING AT A RAPIF PACE.WHY?WHAT CAN BE DONE

IN MANY CITIES, POPULATION IS INCREASING AT A RAPIF PACE. WHY? WHAT CAN BE DONE k6pxn
URBANISATION IS INCLINING SWIFTLY NOWADAYS. PEOPLE ARE MOVING TOWARDS THE BETTER JOB OPPORTUNITIES AND EDUCATION FACILITIES. THE ESSAY WILL NOT ANALYSE THE REASONS ON THE CONTRARY WILL ALSO SUGGEST A NUMBER OF SOLUTION TO CONTAR THESE PROBLEMS. TO COMMENCE WITH, THERE ARE MAINLY TWO RATIONALE WHICH ARE RESPONSIBLE FOR THIS ISSUE. FIRST AND FOREMOST, EDUCATION IS THE KEY ISSUE. TO EXPLAIN UNIVERSITIES AND SCHOOLS ARE OF TOP LEVEL IN CITIES AND YOUNGSTRES WANT TO GET HIGHER EDUCATION WHICH IS NOT AVAILABLE IN VILLAGE. PARENTS ALSO SHIFT WITH THEIR CHILDRENS TO GET THEM INTO BEST SCHOOLS OF THEIR AREA. SECONDLY, EMPLOYMENT IS THE MAJOR ISSUE FOR THE SMALL AREA PEOPLE. JOBSEEKERS MOVE TOWARDS CITIES TO FIND THE JOB OF THEIR LEVEL AS URBAN AREA HAVE MANY INDUSTRIES AND FACTORIES WHICH PROVIDE WHICH EMPLOYS THE PUBLIC SO WHICH IN RESULT LEAD TO INCREASE IN POPULATION. ON THE OTHER HAND, THIS PROBLEM CAN BE COUNTERED IF GOVERNMENT ENGAGE IN IT. AUTHORITIES SHOULD IMPROVE THE EDUCATION SECTOR IN VILLAGES WHICH WILL LEAD TO MAKE PEOPLE STUDY IN THEIR OWN ARE. IT SHOULD ALSO ORDER THE BIG COMPANIES TO SETUP THEIR PROJECTS IN BACKWARD AREAS WHICH WILL INCREASE EMPLOYMENT FOR THE LOCAL PEOPLE. TO CONCLUDE, INCREASING POPULATION IN CITIES IS THE MAJOR PROBLEMS NOWADAYS THIS CAN BE BECAUSE OF EDUCATION FACILITIES AND EMPLOYMENT LEVEL IN CITIES. THIS PROBLEM CAN BE SOLVED BY THE MEASURES FROM THE STATE AND CENTRAL POWER OF COUNTRY
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URBANISATION
IS INCLINING
SWIFTLY
NOWADAYS.
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PEOPLE
ARE MOVING TOWARDS THE BETTER JOB OPPORTUNITIES AND
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EDUCATION
FACILITIES. THE ESSAY WILL NOT
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ANALYSE
THE REASONS
ON THE CONTRARY
WILL
ALSO
SUGGEST A NUMBER OF SOLUTION TO
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CONTAR
THESE PROBLEMS.

TO COMMENCE WITH, THERE ARE
MAINLY
TWO
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RATIONALE
WHICH ARE RESPONSIBLE FOR THIS ISSUE.
FIRST
AND FOREMOST,
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EDUCATION
IS THE KEY ISSUE. TO
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EXPLAIN
UNIVERSITIES AND SCHOOLS ARE OF TOP LEVEL IN
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CITIES
AND
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YOUNGSTRES
WANT TO
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GET
HIGHER
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EDUCATION
WHICH IS NOT AVAILABLE IN VILLAGE. PARENTS
ALSO
SHIFT WITH THEIR
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CHILDRENS
TO
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GET
THEM INTO BEST SCHOOLS OF THEIR
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AREA
.
SECONDLY
, EMPLOYMENT IS THE MAJOR ISSUE FOR THE
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SMALL
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AREA
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PEOPLE
.
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JOBSEEKERS
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MOVE
TOWARDS
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CITIES
TO FIND THE JOB OF THEIR LEVEL AS URBAN
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AREA
HAVE
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MANY
INDUSTRIES AND FACTORIES WHICH PROVIDE WHICH EMPLOYS THE PUBLIC
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SO
WHICH IN RESULT LEAD TO INCREASE IN POPULATION.

ON THE OTHER HAND
, THIS PROBLEM CAN
BE COUNTERED
IF
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GOVERNMENT
ENGAGE IN IT. AUTHORITIES SHOULD
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IMPROVE
THE
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EDUCATION
SECTOR IN VILLAGES WHICH WILL LEAD TO
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MAKE
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PEOPLE
STUDY IN THEIR
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OWN
ARE. IT SHOULD
ALSO
ORDER THE
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BIG
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COMPANIES
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TO SETUP
THEIR PROJECTS IN BACKWARD
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AREAS
WHICH WILL INCREASE EMPLOYMENT FOR THE LOCAL
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PEOPLE
.

TO CONCLUDE
, INCREASING POPULATION IN
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CITIES
IS THE MAJOR PROBLEMS NOWADAYS THIS CAN BE
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BECAUSE
OF
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EDUCATION
FACILITIES AND EMPLOYMENT LEVEL IN
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CITIES
. THIS PROBLEM CAN
BE SOLVED
BY THE MEASURES FROM THE STATE AND CENTRAL POWER OF
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COUNTRY
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IELTS essay IN MANY CITIES, POPULATION IS INCREASING AT A RAPIF PACE. WHY? WHAT CAN BE DONE

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